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Silent Wings

as spring awakens
presenting the butterfly
                               ……..silent wings of change



©2/14/2022

NEWNESS Senryu Poetry Contest

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Caren Krutsinger

February 27, 2022 at 3:38 PM

Congrats - this was a winner!

Brian Sambourne

February 18, 2022 at 2:37 PM

A fine image of butterfly transformation in spring's newness. Congratulations! Brian

I Am Anaya

February 18, 2022 at 12:58 PM

Wow congratulations! Anaya

Christuraj Alex

February 18, 2022 at 7:55 AM

Beautiful. Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues

February 18, 2022 at 6:13 AM

Don’t take for granted those silent wings of change…beautiful! Congratulations, John!

Beata Agustin

February 18, 2022 at 5:01 AM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing your inspiring "Newness" senryu. God bless you.

Sara Kendrick

February 17, 2022 at 3:50 AM

My husband heard the geese heading north yesterday so that is a good sign that spring is almost here, but they were not silent, so he said..LOL..I really like this well thought out work. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara