Silent Wings

as spring awakens presenting the butterfly ……..silent wings of change ©2/14/2022 NEWNESS Senryu Poetry Contest

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/27/2022 3:38:00 PM

Congrats - this was a winner!

Brian Sambourne

Date: 2/18/2022 2:37:00 PM

A fine image of butterfly transformation in spring's newness. Congratulations! Brian

I Am Anaya

Date: 2/18/2022 12:58:00 PM

Wow congratulations! Anaya

Christuraj Alex

Date: 2/18/2022 7:55:00 AM

Beautiful. Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/18/2022 6:13:00 AM

Don’t take for granted those silent wings of change…beautiful! Congratulations, John!

Beata Agustin

Date: 2/18/2022 5:01:00 AM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing your inspiring "Newness" senryu. God bless you.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/17/2022 3:50:00 AM

My husband heard the geese heading north yesterday so that is a good sign that spring is almost here, but they were not silent, so he said..LOL..I really like this well thought out work. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara

Deb M

Date: 2/15/2022 1:55:00 AM

That’s lovely John. Debx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/14/2022 8:24:00 PM

'silent wings of change' -- definitely more pleasing than (ominous) 'winds of change.' ~ Ukraine on the Brain