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Silent Wind Chimes

Silent wind chimes Rain still falls upon my shoulders, green leaves slow dance with crystal droplets to the enchanting melody of saturated skies singing, spider webs wear liquid diamonds, shimmering chandeliers swaying like silent wind chimes on the breeze and puddles act as mirrors where I see my smile as I head down a muddy path, leaving lonely footprints behind, walking towards the sunny day that is you Good morning Soupers

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Date: 1/23/2017 1:20:00 PM
I love how you have captured the beauty of the rain and your ending sent romantic chills! Superb Chris! A good morning indeed! 7 ; )
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Chris Green
Date: 1/23/2017 1:29:00 PM
Thank you again my friend. Regardless of how gloomy and rainy a day is, there is always something beautiful to be found. I am happy you enjoyed this one Connie.
Date: 1/23/2017 12:27:00 PM
this charming poem makes my otherwise rainy day blissful, chris... love it!..huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 1/23/2017 1:28:00 PM
Thank you so very much Nette, I am thrilled this one brought a little joy to your day.
Date: 1/23/2017 12:13:00 PM
Good morning /afternoon..How lovely to walk towards the sunshine..and leave puddles of muddy waters in the past..Sounds like New beginnings.Lovely.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/23/2017 12:24:00 PM
Good morning/afternoon Charmaine. Thank you so much for stopping by my morning poem and leaving such kind words for me.
Date: 1/23/2017 11:13:00 AM
Great write Chris, this poem teems of life and love. All the best and thanks for sharing your great gift.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/23/2017 11:46:00 AM
Thanks so very much Keith. I appreciate your visit and kind words today.
Date: 1/23/2017 9:36:00 AM
Great title for this moving, rhapsodic poem, Chris. Wonderful interplay w/nature and the heart. Bright offering to start the week. Well done this poem is. Love the ending too. Love and peace to you, my friend.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/23/2017 9:45:00 AM
Thank you Freddie for always leaving such kind words for me.
Date: 1/23/2017 8:59:00 AM
Good morning Chris - wow what wonderful lines your imagery is absolutely stunning and spiders web and the wind chime imagery is divine - adding this to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
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Chris Green
Date: 1/23/2017 9:45:00 AM
Good morning Jan. Thank you so very much my friend, I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.
Date: 1/23/2017 8:52:00 AM
Hi Chris, As always you have penned a beautiful morning. Good morning my friend:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 1/23/2017 9:44:00 AM
Good morning Alexis. Thank you so much for stopping by to read this morning. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 1/23/2017 8:27:00 AM
Lovely good morning ...
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Chris Green
Date: 1/23/2017 8:34:00 AM
Thank you so much Probir.
Date: 1/23/2017 8:04:00 AM
- A beautiful picture with positive thoughts, a pleasure to read your words Chris :) - A gorgeous spider web - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/23/2017 8:34:00 AM
Thank you so very much Anne-Lise.
Date: 1/23/2017 7:36:00 AM
Love the silent wind chime theme , Chris. Nice ending with the sunny day that is you. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/23/2017 8:33:00 AM
Thank you and good morning Heidi. What a nice thing to say to me. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 1/23/2017 7:32:00 AM
This is beautiful, Chris:) "saturated skies singing" - wow!! Goooood morning to you with a 7 from me !!
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Chris Green
Date: 1/23/2017 8:33:00 AM
Good morning Jo. I am happy you enjoyed this one
Date: 1/23/2017 7:00:00 AM
Morning Chris, hope you had a good weekend :) I also hope that muddy path indeed leads to the sunny day for you.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/23/2017 8:32:00 AM
Good morning Darren. Thanks for your kindness.

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