Chris Green Poet Free verse

Silent Wind Chimes

Silent wind chimes

Rain still falls
upon my shoulders,
green leaves slow dance
with crystal droplets
to the enchanting melody of
saturated skies singing,
spider webs wear liquid diamonds,
shimmering chandeliers swaying
like silent wind chimes on the breeze
and puddles act as mirrors
where I see my smile
as I head down a muddy path,
leaving lonely footprints behind,
walking towards the sunny day
that is you


Good morning Soupers

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Connie Marcum Wong January 23, 2017 at 1:20 PM I love how you have captured the beauty of the rain and your ending sent romantic chills! Superb Chris! A good morning indeed! 7 ; ) Chris Green January 23, 2017 at 1:29 PM Thank you again my friend. Regardless of how gloomy and rainy a day is, there is always something beautiful to be found. I am happy you enjoyed this one Connie.

Nette Onclaud January 23, 2017 at 12:27 PM this charming poem makes my otherwise rainy day blissful, chris... love it!..huggs Chris Green January 23, 2017 at 1:28 PM Thank you so very much Nette, I am thrilled this one brought a little joy to your day.

Charmaine Chircop January 23, 2017 at 12:13 PM Good morning /afternoon..How lovely to walk towards the sunshine..and leave puddles of muddy waters in the past..Sounds like New beginnings.Lovely. Chris Green January 23, 2017 at 12:24 PM Good morning/afternoon Charmaine. Thank you so much for stopping by my morning poem and leaving such kind words for me.

Keith O.J. Hunt January 23, 2017 at 11:13 AM Great write Chris, this poem teems of life and love. All the best and thanks for sharing your great gift. Chris Green January 23, 2017 at 11:46 AM Thanks so very much Keith. I appreciate your visit and kind words today.

Freddie Robinson Jr. January 23, 2017 at 9:36 AM Great title for this moving, rhapsodic poem, Chris. Wonderful interplay w/nature and the heart. Bright offering to start the week. Well done this poem is. Love the ending too. Love and peace to you, my friend. Chris Green January 23, 2017 at 9:45 AM Thank you Freddie for always leaving such kind words for me.

Jan Allison January 23, 2017 at 8:59 AM Good morning Chris - wow what wonderful lines your imagery is absolutely stunning and spiders web and the wind chime imagery is divine - adding this to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx Chris Green January 23, 2017 at 9:45 AM Good morning Jan. Thank you so very much my friend, I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.

Alexis Y. January 23, 2017 at 8:52 AM Hi Chris, As always you have penned a beautiful morning. Good morning my friend:-) Alexis Chris Green January 23, 2017 at 9:44 AM Good morning Alexis. Thank you so much for stopping by to read this morning. I appreciate you my friend.

Probir Gupta January 23, 2017 at 8:27 AM Lovely good morning ... Chris Green January 23, 2017 at 8:34 AM Thank you so much Probir.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 23, 2017 at 8:04 AM - A beautiful picture with positive thoughts, a pleasure to read your words Chris :) - A gorgeous spider web - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Chris Green January 23, 2017 at 8:34 AM Thank you so very much Anne-Lise.

Heidi Sands January 23, 2017 at 7:36 AM Love the silent wind chime theme , Chris. Nice ending with the sunny day that is you. :) Chris Green January 23, 2017 at 8:33 AM Thank you and good morning Heidi. What a nice thing to say to me. I appreciate you my friend.

Joanna Daniel January 23, 2017 at 7:32 AM This is beautiful, Chris:) "saturated skies singing" - wow!! Goooood morning to you with a 7 from me !! Chris Green January 23, 2017 at 8:33 AM Good morning Jo. I am happy you enjoyed this one

Darren White January 23, 2017 at 7:00 AM Morning Chris, hope you had a good weekend :) I also hope that muddy path indeed leads to the sunny day for you. Chris Green January 23, 2017 at 8:32 AM Good morning Darren. Thanks for your kindness.