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Silent Wars

My screams are void Interrupted by blurred groans Drums beating, Echoing in the dead of night, Unavoidable Silent wars has begun Quarrels set off, Throwing away love Who wins? Who has gone missing? No one knows in silent wars

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2014 9:40:00 PM

Hi David... Nice seeing your poem featured on the poetry soups home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/13/2014 5:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, David

Ana Espinola Collins

Date: 5/12/2014 8:22:00 PM

Great poem David...Short and powerful... I really liked it :) Ana

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/19/2013 12:25:00 AM

Dear David Young POET Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Who wins? Who has gone missing? Looks like a part 2 in the Future YOU have enticed me. You got my curiosity Stirring Superb Suspense LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/4/2012 12:41:00 AM

Love this. I can feel the beat, and the silence of the warfare. Really got my blood boiling. Excellent one, bro! Always, Laura

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/9/2010 11:27:00 AM

It appears that there are always MIAs in silent wars. No one truly knows the real impact except the person experiencing the moment. Drums in the middle of the night are always impacting. I like the use of the rhetorical questions to bring the poem to light. Great job! Joseph

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/6/2010 3:27:00 PM

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup David. I hope you plan on being here and writing for years to come. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today. Wishing you the best always. Love, Carol