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Silent Wars

My screams are void
Interrupted by blurred groans
Drums beating,
Echoing in the dead of night,
Unavoidable
Silent wars has begun 
Quarrels set off,
Throwing away love

Who wins? Who has gone missing?
No one knows in silent wars

Copyright © J.W. Earnings | Year Posted 2010

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/13/2014 9:40:00 PM Hi David... Nice seeing your poem featured on the poetry soups home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 5/13/2014 5:48:00 AM Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, David Login to Reply

Ana Espinola Collins Date: 5/12/2014 8:22:00 PM Great poem David...Short and powerful... I really liked it :) Ana Login to Reply

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Date: 3/19/2013 12:25:00 AM Dear David Young POET Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Who wins? Who has gone missing? Looks like a part 2 in the Future YOU have enticed me. You got my curiosity Stirring Superb Suspense LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry Login to Reply

Laura Breidenthal Date: 11/4/2012 12:41:00 AM Love this. I can feel the beat, and the silence of the warfare. Really got my blood boiling. Excellent one, bro! Always, Laura Login to Reply

Joseph Spence Sr Date: 7/9/2010 11:27:00 AM It appears that there are always MIAs in silent wars. No one truly knows the real impact except the person experiencing the moment. Drums in the middle of the night are always impacting. I like the use of the rhetorical questions to bring the poem to light. Great job! Joseph Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/6/2010 3:27:00 PM Thank you for sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup David. I hope you plan on being here and writing for years to come. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today. Wishing you the best always. Love, Carol Login to Reply