Silent Visitor

dress in pure white
disclose in morning curtain
unwelcome beauty
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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February 12, 2011 at 11:32 AM
Last line makes it slight intriguing!nicely written Haiku--kashinath
K. Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 7:32 AM
This sure got me smiling, Noriko :) beautiful and intriguing image you paint here with your haiku-- your title drew me in and happy that it did :)
Adeite Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 1:00 AM
wow, great imagery, well it's just nature's beauty, inevitably unavoidable. Thanks for sharing this great piece with us, I am adding this to my favorite. Please keep painting your poetry pad with the cute colours of creativity. Hope to read more from you. Have a great weekend dear friend! Love always, Adeleke.
Dietrich Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 9:05 PM
Sounds intriguing!! (hmmm, maybe Robert down here got it, and I agree with his assessment).
Pettit Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 7:42 PM
If you are describing a morning winter snowfall with this haiku, then you have done a marvelous job.
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