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Silent Visitor

dress in pure white disclose in morning curtain unwelcome beauty

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Kash Poet

Date: 2/12/2011 11:32:00 AM

Last line makes it slight intriguing!nicely written Haiku--kashinath

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/12/2011 7:32:00 AM

This sure got me smiling, Noriko :) beautiful and intriguing image you paint here with your haiku-- your title drew me in and happy that it did :)

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 2/12/2011 1:00:00 AM

wow, great imagery, well it's just nature's beauty, inevitably unavoidable. Thanks for sharing this great piece with us, I am adding this to my favorite. Please keep painting your poetry pad with the cute colours of creativity. Hope to read more from you. Have a great weekend dear friend! Love always, Adeleke.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/11/2011 9:05:00 PM

Sounds intriguing!! (hmmm, maybe Robert down here got it, and I agree with his assessment).

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/11/2011 7:42:00 PM

If you are describing a morning winter snowfall with this haiku, then you have done a marvelous job.