Silent Traveler

A creaking floorboard that never creaks; clearly something’s here. Feeling like someone’s behind me; staring; chills tapping on my spine. Ethereal spirit traveler, passing through my house.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Fraser Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 2:51 PM
Indeed the silent traveller's do pass, and we never see them. Nice one, James.....
Kiser Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 3:28 PM
Glad you liked it and thanks.
Gasun Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 7:35 AM
A great Halloween poem my dear friend, M.L. I am so delighted to read it tonight. Thank you so much for sharing! love lots and hugs, Leonora
Kiser Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 1:41 PM
Thanks for stopping by to read and comment.
Dietrich Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 11:35 PM
oooh, very well done for Halloween. ME LIKES
Dunn Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 6:41 PM
Opps sorry about the last comment I thought you read the ghost train, lol I'm tired my friend, I've been up scene 5 am, I love the house of spirits down from my house is such a small old brown stone and in every window is a wind chimes, it is a second hand store, and when you go in it gives me the creeps, being a sensitive I pick up one things and I won't stay inside for long, so this was my inspiration for this poem, cheri
Kiser Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 2:41 PM
Well, thank you.
Dunn Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 6:36 PM
A spooky taie wonderfully full of creepy errieness just perfect for Halloween, loved it cheri glad you like my ghost train stay alert my friend just encase his list runs empty tonight and he has more seats to filll lol just kidding, cheri
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