Silent Train

In the middle of nowhere amidst this barren terrain
Silent scatter of suitcases surrounds an empty train
Passengers gone, quietness aplenty
Signs of life none no visible sentries
 
Carriage after carriage as far as the eye can see
For the thousands of occupants where can they be
As we approach the engine buildings appear
Smoking chimneys, some figures become clear
 
Stripe suited and shaved, emaciated to thin
What world have we walked into, seeing skeletal skins
The sweet smell of the acrid smoke
Stinging our eyes, catching our throats
 
As we enter the buildings that are emitting the smoke
The stench and the sight leaves us sickly in choke
Bodies charred, broken, naked unjust
In this war that we have lived, inhumane, disgust
 
Night turns to day as we witness it clear
To do this to humans, what did the Germans fear
Later that day on the news we've heard
For we haven't witnessed the first, there's been further abuse
 
We reach Berlin my platoon and I
For the past five years of fighting, we still wonder why



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 16, 2014 at 1:23 PM
James :) It was nice to see your poem featured in the poetry soups, home page this past week. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever *LINDA
Mehta Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 9:35 AM
Hello James, not seen much on the PS. Congratulations on your poem being featured this, week,
Rhinem Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 7:13 AM
† I Was Just Thinking Of That Moment As I Awoke A Bit Ago; And Here It Is, This, Incomprehensible Atrocity's Passing Through Time ˜ My Thinking Was If Humanity Believed They Were Now Much More Civilized And Incapable In Finding Such Sorrows Arising Once More ? I Consider The Internet Bringing More Depth About Her Globe Towards Yes, We All Hold Hearts ˜ But, Gazing About It Is Clear That No, The Beast Still Breathes: Helter Skelter ? Congrats My Friend; Misty As Powerful! ˜ Love John
Austin Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 11:25 AM
Heart breaking to remember. Congrats on the selection. daver
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March 11, 2014 at 10:34 AM
James, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. I'm always enjoying The Soups top picks of the week. Take Care ~SKAT~
Lopez Avatar
May 7, 2010 at 6:49 PM
very nice Highlander .... a vivid picture that you have painted with words..... thanks for sharing. I looked for the ther poem, Holokauston but I could not find it?
Herber Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 4:51 PM
It felt like I was right there, smelling the stench, smoke stinging my eyes, the crude site feeling like a punch in my stomach! I love how your words come to life and reach out and draw the reader into them! Awesome job as usual! Deb
Guzzi Avatar
July 30, 2009 at 11:56 AM
So much good writting & I'm not sure which war verse I like best goodness! Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
July 24, 2009 at 11:37 AM
Good writing about WWII and the destruction of an innocent people. Sara
Doggett Avatar
July 24, 2009 at 7:12 AM
Great hyme, Jim. The question is always WHY!
Chircop Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 9:26 AM
War leaves nothing but bad memories behind and physically,even mentally wounded people...i love the title'The Silent Train",silent can kill many times and so do wars and fights--good message Fraser--charma
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July 22, 2009 at 9:15 AM
Vivid reminder of the ugliness of war. Powerful poem. Thank you for sharing it. Karen
Bird Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 8:21 AM
Great Work James! Always a plesure to come here and read your heartfelt words.
Joseph Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 6:58 AM
amazing work, well done.
Devonshire Avatar
July 21, 2009 at 7:44 PM
Oh, my! I had no idea where this was going and was startled to read the ending. After rereading it, however, you gave us many clues: the stench, skeletal skin and the infamous trains onto which the condemned were crammed. Amazing! Excellent work, James! Love, Carolyn
Knox Avatar
July 21, 2009 at 4:27 PM
wonderfully written , keep up the good work :)
Petersen Potter Avatar
July 21, 2009 at 3:36 PM
Excellent poem, James.I like all the imagery in it.You've done a very nice job with this one.God bless you! D.
Rider Avatar
July 21, 2009 at 3:33 PM
James, noone who lived through this war, or any war, can imagine the why's, but you have written a very heartfelt, piece on the genecide, in hopes it is never forgotten. and thank you for your comments on my new postings also, you make me smile.
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