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Silent Sunset

After Sunset
rushing waters

The river comes down
The ocean ends it all
A crying town,
Monkeys all around
Sundown, 
Silent waters, 
Touching the edge of my skin
Words pour with out a sound.

the sky comes to life

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Skat A

Date: 1/30/2014 4:31:00 AM

deep and beautiful

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/11/2013 2:09:00 AM

sweet, stopping by a second and third time................... xoxoxoxoxoox ;-)

Skat A

Date: 8/20/2013 9:24:00 PM

well done Sandy, .congrats... love ~SKAT~:-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/19/2013 5:13:00 PM

Hi Sandy, a beautiful sunset poem ... congratulations!! PD

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/18/2013 9:03:00 AM

Congratulations, I enjoyed your sunset.

Len Gasun

Date: 8/18/2013 5:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win my dear friend and libramate SandyIvy. Thank you so much for your very spectacular and outstanding poem. I love it so much and so enjoyed. How I wish you've written your name at the bottom of your which is one of my rules. Thank you so much for your full support. Have a blessed day! Big hugs! Love lots, Leonora

Sandy Ivy D

Date: 8/9/2013 2:50:00 PM

thanks Justin