Silent Sunset

After Sunset
rushing waters

The river comes down
The ocean ends it all
A crying town,
Monkeys all around
Sundown, 
Silent waters, 
Touching the edge of my skin
Words pour with out a sound.

the sky comes to life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 30, 2014 at 4:31 AM
deep and beautiful
A   Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 2:09 AM
sweet, stopping by a second and third time................... xoxoxoxoxoox ;-)
A  Avatar
August 20, 2013 at 9:24 PM
well done Sandy, .congrats... love ~SKAT~:-)
A   Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 5:13 PM
Hi Sandy, a beautiful sunset poem ... congratulations!! PD
Lamoureux Avatar
August 18, 2013 at 9:03 AM
Congratulations, I enjoyed your sunset.
Gasun Avatar
August 18, 2013 at 5:57 AM
Congratulations on your win my dear friend and libramate SandyIvy. Thank you so much for your very spectacular and outstanding poem. I love it so much and so enjoyed. How I wish you've written your name at the bottom of your which is one of my rules. Thank you so much for your full support. Have a blessed day! Big hugs! Love lots, Leonora
Ivy D Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 2:50 PM
thanks Justin
Bordner Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 11:47 PM
Makes me think of the tetragramaton - sometimes lif eis best express with the image of words rather than the sound of them - J.A.B. %
Burch Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 1:04 PM
Congratulations on your win! hugs, deb
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May 10, 2012 at 7:05 AM
Congratulations on your winning piece Sandylvy xx
Grisetti Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 9:31 PM
Congratulations.
Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 8:36 PM
Very interesting one, SandyIvy. Congrats on this enjoyable poem
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May 9, 2012 at 6:21 PM
Congratulations on your win! Lori
Guzzi Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 3:25 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Williams Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 7:13 AM
Sandyivy congrats on your win..David
Brown Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 5:25 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "175" contest SandyIvy. Love, Carol
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