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Silent Sunrise- Visual 7

As darkness hides, the morning peeps
her cautious face through starry veils
let down; an inch by inch it creeps.
As darkness hides, the morning peeps
down to the earth, who gently sleeps
while nighttime flees. The morn prevails
as darkness hides; the morning peeps
her cautious face through starry veils.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Hopper Avatar
August 17, 2019 at 5:10 PM
This is lovely!
Merryman Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 8:32 PM
Beautiful wording on this, Isaiah! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Haight Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 8:24 PM
Very lovely, Isaiah. Congratulations on your nice win! Sandra
A  Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 6:23 PM
this is stunning Isaiah, I wish I could write a triolet like this. Congrats on the win. SKAT
Lawless Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 7:08 AM
Isaiah this triolet lulled me into a quiet rhythmic cadence as it read so smoothly. Excellent weaving of the triolet threads.
Allison Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 5:30 AM
This was so stunning Isaiah - dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 12:40 AM
Perfect in every way, and you got your enjambment going on too!! That always makes me happy to see poets writing that way. Congrats for a top win, Isaiah. Your picking that particular picture says a lot about who you are!
Onclaud Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 9:45 AM
lustrous write, Isaiah...i think of aurora and just sigh!.. greeat write!.. huggs
A  Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 8:02 PM
beautiful imagery, enjoyed your write .. *always, S.K.A.T.*
La France Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 4:48 PM
Isaiah, this is outstanding, a beautiful write 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, on broken wings
Leiser Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 1:50 PM
Beautifully written triolet, Isaiah! I really enjoyed the imagery in this, and it describes the scene well. Good luck in the contest :)
Allison Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 12:32 PM
simply stunning Isaiah - this is the first one I have read for this particular visual:-) Hugs Jan xx 7
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