"silent Song"

Her songs were hers yet us she gave...
That by which her heart we'd save.
From troubles bairn o'foolish strife...
Of prospect nil or turmoil rife.

Amid those mountains deep with dew...
Heard these words just those few.
Silent song or rhythmic chant...
Mountain through her did so rant.

Took we did with breathless dare...
Her burdens oh so great.
Carried then through time aware...
So such with to fear abate.

On sang she to us all...
Thus her heart now doth fall.
Into that which best be felt...
Within such song her tear did melt.

SeaWolf
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February 11, 2012 at 4:55 PM
Congratulations on your well-written featured poem, I enjoyed reading it.
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February 10, 2012 at 8:41 AM
congrats on having this wonderful piece featured this week
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February 7, 2012 at 12:27 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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February 7, 2012 at 12:15 AM
Seawolf, congratulations on having your poem featured on Poetry Soup this week.................S.Ronthorpe
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August 14, 2010 at 7:01 PM
love this one too
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