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Why are shining stars spread across the sky like twinkling torches tethered to the night? And why are some seemingly so close by, like dangling diamonds sparkling with light? Believers say stars took form through God's will, but scientists believe in the big bang. Although dubiously skeptical, I still behold breathtaking beauty, where they hang. Burning brilliantly, they'll end as all things do, though at a substantially slower pace. Like trillions of pinpricks, stars poke holes through the flimsy, featureless fabric of space. Silent sentinels spied through telescopes, they symbolize secretive, hidden hopes. (Sonnet) 7/2/2018

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Date: 7/3/2018 12:18:00 AM
Emile.. I loved reading your poem this evening with a delightful bedtime tea. I look forward to reading more of your creative works tomorrow.. sleep well!
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Date: 7/3/2018 8:40:00 AM
Thanks so much Lyric Man, your support is truly appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/2/2018 3:19:00 PM
Lovely, Emile. Well done.
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Date: 7/3/2018 8:39:00 AM
Thanks so much Line, your support is truly appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/2/2018 2:13:00 PM
Nice write, Emile!
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Date: 7/2/2018 3:12:00 PM
Thanks so much Kim, your support is truly appreciated my friend, Emile.

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