Silent Roosters Sleep

SILENT ROOSTERS SLEEP
Dads don’t sleep. They drive over-packed cars, and sip coffee from a thermos cup. Kids in backseat mull over grandma’s home ~ roosters never move, cuckoo clock never quits, and grandma’s always at the door, waiting. Front passenger divvies out cheerios and chips. The turnpike yawns with well-worn pitstops. All seats salivate for grandma’s homemade coffee cake. “Are we there yet?” echoes, bounces, plays with the driver’s nerves. Dads get revenge, transforming the auto into a tour bus. Pointer finger flashes toward a birthplace, a high school, and a park, and finally a hearth in the suburbs of Depew.
silent roosters sleep moonlight auto unpacks dawn crowing door exhales 7/14/2017 Haibun Form
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Marcum Wong Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 11:13 AM
Congratulations on your terrific second placement with this charming haibun Kim! : )
Rodrigues Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 11:25 AM
Thank you, Connie!
Roper Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 6:18 PM
Very nicely done, Kim, I love the Haiku attached .I remember those days when I was young in a station wagon... Congratulations on your wonderful win well deserved... ~*
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 8:04 PM
Thanks, Eve! Yup, we had a station wagon too! One was purple :)
Cozart Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 4:20 PM
I've been the kid in that backseat. Congrats on your win!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 4:24 PM
:) Thanks!
Hopkins-Drewer Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 3:35 PM
Let's hear it for the Dads!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 4:24 PM
Woot woot
Trifiatis Avatar
July 17, 2017 at 7:30 AM
Superb dear, Kim! All is well when children we are and everyone is waiting after us...
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 3:36 PM
So true. <3 Thanks Demetrios!
Wood Avatar
July 16, 2017 at 8:18 PM
Very nice Kim. This gem transported me to road trips of the past. "crowing door exhales" Great! - Dean
Rodrigues Avatar
July 16, 2017 at 8:29 PM
Thank you, Dean!
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