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Silent Repose

Slumber beseeched this sight which closed In warmth of silence to brush repose.... Silkened choirs of soft voices heard Scions whispers gracing ivories notes ~ As carriages gliding atop sweet serenities Keys as visions amid these their dreams In violet hues composed upon the candescent walls Awakening vistas once held dormant inside Portraitures, panoramic blinds.... Reciprocating their eye shadow etchings these, cosmetic designs Until, slumber beseeched this sight which closed ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ In warmth of silence, to brush repose ~

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Rhia Madison Thomer

Date: 4/18/2011 4:55:00 PM

my good friend! it has been quite some time indeed! i am glad i took some time for myself today to look you up! what a treat this was indeed! beautiful lines, a fantastic piece of work! i hope you are well! all the best --madison

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/26/2011 1:26:00 PM

I am trying to forgive, John. Celene has, but the remarks left for my dear friend Dane Ann wounded her very much. And I am very loyal to her.

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 3/21/2011 10:59:00 AM

I'll leave that com, just cause, it was a different time dear one. If you ever want me to remove "just ask", I do not know all things, if people do not tell me, how am I to know. outta the house, guests and their wantings me to realize so much about myself, he said dongnut and coffee?! wrong moment in my life, especially these temptings as of late, I told him to give the doughnut to a bum, He said "I WILL, that's a good IDEA.GONE.BACK TO MY FIRST LOVE not my best friend!sorry, drama

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 3/21/2011 10:59:00 AM

could've used silent repose I suppose..

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 3/16/2011 10:04:00 AM

i REMOVED MY COMS BECAUE THEY ALL SEEM TO BOTHER YOU, IT WAS DONE OF GOOD INTENT, i HAD ASKED YOU TO BLOCK ME WHILE i COULD FIX THE PROBLEMS AND MISTAKES IN MANNERS i MADE. THANK YOU, CINDY CAYTON

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 3/13/2011 7:47:00 PM

A melodic write John with artistic notes. Love it! Lay

James Tate

Date: 3/6/2011 7:09:00 AM

Wow! what verbiage! Wish my pen would swing as freely. I'll have to visit your work often.

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 2/25/2011 1:03:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful John, a delight to have stopped by today. Computer still playing up a bit but much better than was! Hope all well with you? Thanks for your comments as ever... ;'D

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/23/2011 9:48:00 AM

Great work, John...Enjoyed reading your romantic verse this afternoon..Thanks for the kind comments about my work..Very uplifting are your words..Sara

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/23/2011 6:14:00 AM

beautiful as always...thanks for your comment on my silly puppy poem.

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/22/2011 7:20:00 PM

Very descriptive writing. An enjoyable read.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/21/2011 6:52:00 PM

enjoyed reading your brilliant work today. Happy PResidents Day!!!*** and a late Happy Valentine's Day to you!!! I have been negligent to my soup friends lately....so much life has thrown at me and something had to go. I will try to be more attentive my friend!

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/21/2011 1:53:00 PM

Another "beautiful feather for your worthy hat", John. Love, Annalise

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 2/21/2011 12:22:00 PM

beautiful poem john