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-Silent Pistol

Winds of change

Hauntingly whisper

Terrifyingly roar

Silhouette at door

Silent pistol

evilfearmysterysilencefree verse

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Victor Buhagiar

October 29, 2023 at 8:36 AM

Man is hell-bent to kill. As my rather long poem shows. Blessings

Deb M

November 3, 2023 at 1:50 PM

Thanks Victor… Appreciated ….Debx

Silent One

October 28, 2023 at 10:06 AM

damn this one is a scary one.. nice arrangement of words.. Very sad what happened... again.

Deb M

October 28, 2023 at 10:10 AM

Thankyou S.O….yes sad sad times in general! Appreciate your comment! Debx

Nancy Kaufman

October 28, 2023 at 3:16 AM

Timely and well spoken words, Dear Deb.

Deb M

October 28, 2023 at 8:07 AM

Thanks Nancy! Debx

Victor Buhagiar

October 28, 2023 at 2:29 AM

Why do Americans kill themselves? !8 already declared dead and the coward seems to have killed himself afterwards. May they rest in peace. Blessings.

Deb M

October 28, 2023 at 2:56 AM

Sad, terrible times Victor….who knows why a human does this to other humans ….too hard to fathom… poor loved ones…..Thankyou…Debx

Ink Empress

October 27, 2023 at 10:38 PM

Haunting truth we see in so many places. Silent pistol is worse than one that is loud i think, can be a metaphor too someone or something that is deceptive and seems harmless in sight! In few words you’ve written such a profound poem that would get readers to ponder and feel! I can hear the terrifying roar too through your words.loved this! Always a pleasure reading your work

Deb M

October 28, 2023 at 2:54 AM

It is always a pleasure reading your comments IE….your comments are encouraging and confidence building….needed when self doubt rears its ugly head! Thanks….Debx

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