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Silent Pistol

Winds of change Hauntingly whisper Terrifyingly roar Silhouette at door Silent pistol

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/29/2023 8:36:00 AM

Man is hell-bent to kill. As my rather long poem shows. Blessings

Deb M
Date: 11/3/2023 1:50:00 PM

Thanks Victor… Appreciated ….Debx

Silent One

Date: 10/28/2023 10:06:00 AM

damn this one is a scary one.. nice arrangement of words.. Very sad what happened... again.

Deb M
Date: 10/28/2023 10:10:00 AM

Thankyou S.O….yes sad sad times in general! Appreciate your comment! Debx

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 10/28/2023 3:16:00 AM

Timely and well spoken words, Dear Deb.

Deb M
Date: 10/28/2023 8:07:00 AM

Thanks Nancy! Debx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/28/2023 2:29:00 AM

Why do Americans kill themselves? !8 already declared dead and the coward seems to have killed himself afterwards. May they rest in peace. Blessings.

Deb M
Date: 10/28/2023 2:56:00 AM

Sad, terrible times Victor….who knows why a human does this to other humans ….too hard to fathom… poor loved ones…..Thankyou…Debx

Ink Empress

Date: 10/27/2023 10:38:00 PM

Haunting truth we see in so many places. Silent pistol is worse than one that is loud i think, can be a metaphor too someone or something that is deceptive and seems harmless in sight! In few words you’ve written such a profound poem that would get readers to ponder and feel! I can hear the terrifying roar too through your words.loved this! Always a pleasure reading your work

Deb M
Date: 10/28/2023 2:54:00 AM

It is always a pleasure reading your comments IE….your comments are encouraging and confidence building….needed when self doubt rears its ugly head! Thanks….Debx

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/27/2023 3:14:00 PM

mysterious and a bit spooky. I liked 'silhouette at door.' Nicely done, Deb. Sara

Deb M
Date: 10/27/2023 4:22:00 PM

Thankyou Miss Sara! Debx

Mat Ignacio

Date: 10/27/2023 2:42:00 PM

intriguing - nicely said

Deb M
Date: 10/27/2023 4:21:00 PM

Thankyou very much Mat! Debx