Silent Pain

I have a feeling called "The Silent Pain"
My whole world has been beaten and broken down.
In this world, there is nothing left for me to gain.
I might as well just drown.
As my wrists bleed, it becomes harder for me to strain.
Life makes me frown.

Others see me in the day
and they think I'm doing well.
I feel like moving away
and entering my own hell.
I then think of "him", I want to make him pay.
Without making a sound, I want to scream and yell.

Time hasn't healed my pain at all.
The ache is building in my chest.
I have begun to create a wall.
I wish this would end, I need rest.
I want to quiet my fears.
But instead I just shed these silent tears.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/23/2015 4:58:00 AM
I love this poem. I can relate. thank you for an amazing work. very nice. checked the others as well. I like that I can relate to them. keep it up. I'm a fan. please take the time to look at some of mine sometimes.
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Kay Cassio
Date: 2/23/2015 11:39:00 AM
Thanks for the review, I will surely check yours out as well!
Date: 2/22/2015 8:31:00 PM
I can feel the pain in your lines. I pray that God may give you the tools to know how to deal with the issue. And keep writing, its good for you. Blessings
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Date: 2/22/2015 8:40:00 PM
Thanks so much. I love writing.
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