Arthur Vaso Poet Light Verse

Silent Nights

The night held a cool northern breeze
Windows opened, the curtains fluttering in the air
I listened to her breathing, feeling her soul rise and fall
The heat of the night clung to me like her scent on my fingers
The silence was overwhelming
For the love I felt
I gazed out the window at all the stars in the sky
Thinking to myself in silence
I have a lovely star right here by my side

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Debbie Mills-Kelly April 24, 2014 at 4:57 PM Very beautiful.... what a lucky Star :)

Lucilla Carrillo April 22, 2014 at 8:54 PM Oh Wow1 I love this one. You have a way with words. This is what makes poetry special. Everyone writes different. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla Arthur Vaso April 22, 2014 at 9:17 PM Thank you Lucilla, however I must add, you have inspired me, with your poems!

Cameron Hartley April 21, 2014 at 11:04 PM oooh pretty :) favorite line: I listened to her breathing, feeling her soul rise and fall Arthur Vaso April 22, 2014 at 9:22 PM Thanks, I liked that line too!!

Kelly Deschler April 21, 2014 at 1:07 PM This poem is just beautiful. Such a lovely write, Arthur. I really, really enjoyed it!...Thank you so much for your kind comments. I was really touched by them! :) Arthur Vaso April 22, 2014 at 9:26 PM You are most welcome, it was my pleasure.

Toquyen Harrell April 21, 2014 at 9:05 AM Oh, I love it! Awesome, Arthur :) Arthur Vaso April 22, 2014 at 9:27 PM Thanks a bunch!!

Connie Marcum Wong April 21, 2014 at 4:46 AM Wow! I love this beautiful romantic poem! You are standing in the same line with Byron, Keats, Neruda as long as you keep writing like this. Another that will go into my favorites along with you! Aloha and a Happy Easter to you too Arthur!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 21, 2014 at 3:52 AM Wow!! I see a different shade of Arthur on these prose.. The lighter side someone that's feel peace inside.. I love the last last line.. It's true when you found that someone whom you find all that there is the stars, moon and sun lights depreciate for what you have shines deeper than the superficial.. It's a transformer light :) this another sweet one:), olive eloisa :) Arthur Vaso April 22, 2014 at 9:31 PM What a beautiful comment, thank you so much!!!

Karen Anglesey April 20, 2014 at 10:10 PM So romantically sweet. Well done! Arthur Vaso April 22, 2014 at 9:32 PM And sweet of you to say so!

Faye Gibson April 20, 2014 at 8:45 PM Beautiful expression of love. Enjoying your other poems as well. Arthur Vaso April 20, 2014 at 8:50 PM This is so very kind of you, I wish you a happy Easter!!!!

Casarah Nance April 20, 2014 at 7:32 PM sweet. i love your feelings when you write. I can read your soul in yours words and it is very gentle :) Arthur Vaso April 20, 2014 at 7:36 PM You are a very very very kind sweet person!