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Silent Madness of the Mold

She drove me into madness and a hollowing despair, Meddling with concern with the greatest amount of flair, Probing a life of personal choices that is only mine to know, Crushing my spirit into her mold and refusing to let me go. She never makes a stand for others if their could be cost to her, Leading a life to please the people without creating any stir, I can not fit that shape she wants my unique and brazen soul to be, Instead I live in her requested silence and eternal misery.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/3/2015 9:38:00 PM
Faith I like when you say, I can not fit that shape she wants my unique and brazen soul to be. That shows strength and you not compromising yourself for anyone. Powerful words that show strength in character. Nice write and welcome to Poetry soup my friend. I'm fairly new also. Lots of wonderful poets here all the ones that comment I look up to.
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Date: 10/4/2015 12:13:00 PM
thank you michael...
Date: 9/27/2015 9:00:00 PM
Hi faith, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/29/2015 5:31:00 PM
thank you so much for the kind welcome :)
Date: 9/27/2015 1:18:00 PM
Faith, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 9/27/2015 1:46:00 PM
thank you skat...for the kind welcome to poetry soup...i hope to post at least once or twice a week...I juggle working, and a family and a house as well..so..even once a week to get a poem posted would be nice
Date: 9/27/2015 11:55:00 AM
This poetic trip though the heart is, thought provoking, descriptive, and creative all rolled up into a beautiful poem. Your emotions and poetic energy wrap themselves around your words and we are left wanting more. Emile.
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Date: 9/27/2015 1:45:00 PM
thanks emile...i plan on cleaning up the syllable count and probably adding a verse or two it was on my mind and i had to post it right away before i lost the feeling
Date: 9/27/2015 9:18:00 AM
- Hey Faith :) - Welcome with your first poem here on P- Soup - Hope your stay will give you much pleasure - I've been here since 11/26/2011 ....... it is a pleasure to share poems and read what others write - I wish you good luck :) - Nice to "meet" you :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/26/2015 2:00:00 PM
Your madness and despair is beautifully penned ... Love this write ! Can't wait to read more from you ... Bev
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Date: 9/27/2015 1:44:00 PM
thanks bev i appreciate your comment
Date: 9/26/2015 1:31:00 PM
I think you want 'refusing' instead of 'refuses'. This is a great write, very emotional and dramatic. I enjoyed it very much ... CayCay
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Date: 9/27/2015 1:49:00 PM
take a look at some of the changes i made cay cay...
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Date: 9/26/2015 1:36:00 PM
thanks cay cay, it was a quick write and quick post, I did not even count the syllables but intend on cleaning it up in the future and maybe even adding another verse or two. I appreciate the comment