.silent Is Silver.

If silver is expensive expensive is lost lost is silence silence is silver the silver silence covers my lost lips my lips are silent my lips are silver silver is silent the silver silence bounds my wrists together my wrists are silver my wrists are silent silent is silver silence is silver lost in silence expensive is lost is silver expensive?

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Sue Mason

Date: 4/8/2009 6:20:00 PM

Very interesting write here Ana ... the young lady I know spells her name Anna and lives here in Eugene, Oregon. She probably hates me because I don't take any b.s. from her ... smile ... and, I'm an old lady and lots of young people have "problems" with old people but thats okay, we can't all be Ms. Popularity ... smile ... this is a very interesting write you've done here!! I love silence and try to spend as much time in it as I can ... there's too much noise in this world ... smile ...

Robin L. Gass

Date: 12/9/2008 8:07:00 AM

This is a very clever and well written poem. Thanks for your thoughtful comment and sharing this wonderful write. Love Robin