Silent Flowing Water

Silent flowing water,
Why d'ye call me?
D'ye want me to ken
Thy journey?
D'ye want me to know
How you surmount
The problems of thy journey
Oh you flow like a song
With a smile
Lucent water,
You manifest
The magic of sunlight
Undaunted you're dear
You're a sign of courage
You impede me to follow,
The wrong way of life
Calm and cool water dear,
The balmy winds
Fain blow with you
You want to give me love
That's why you call me
Silent flowing water dear,
I know you want me to,
Carry the things you teach me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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October 21, 2017 at 3:01 PM
This is a beatiful flowing poem..
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October 22, 2017 at 1:38 AM
Thanks my friend.
Smith Avatar
October 15, 2017 at 7:55 PM
Lovely and flowing like the water Harshita, keep up your good work...
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April 17, 2019 at 11:45 AM
Thanks Charlie
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October 15, 2017 at 5:54 AM
Harshita, I loved much of what your poem had to say. The water wonts for you to know and follow. And perhaps, we are talking about more than water here :)
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April 17, 2019 at 11:46 AM
Yes my friend, water is a source of encouragement for me. Thank you for reading my work
Michael Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 9:35 AM
Yes, Harshita... Keep writing...You have a lot to give to this art form...I enjoyed your poem...As usual, I wish you success in all your endeavors...
Gupta Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 5:25 AM
Enjoyed reading this poem ... Smoothly flowing stream ...
Ashley Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 7:48 PM
Such a beautiful write Harshita. Lovely lines like; 'With a smile Lucent water, You manifest The magic of sunlight' just pure joy and poetic expression. A lovely write and enjoyed :)
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October 2, 2017 at 3:00 PM
Hi Harshita: Your beautiful poem flows like the water. Great Write!
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