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Silent Flowing Water

Silent flowing water, Why d'ye call me? D'ye want me to ken Thy journey? D'ye want me to know How you surmount The problems of thy journey Oh you flow like a song With a smile Lucent water, You manifest The magic of sunlight Undaunted you're dear You're a sign of courage You impede me to follow, The wrong way of life Calm and cool water dear, The balmy winds Fain blow with you You want to give me love That's why you call me Silent flowing water dear, I know you want me to, Carry the things you teach me

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Silent One

Date: 10/21/2017 3:01:00 PM

This is a beatiful flowing poem..

Harshita Chaudhary
Date: 10/22/2017 1:38:00 AM

Thanks my friend.

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/15/2017 7:55:00 PM

Lovely and flowing like the water Harshita, keep up your good work...

Harshita Chaudhary
Date: 4/17/2019 11:45:00 AM

Thanks Charlie

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/15/2017 5:54:00 AM

Harshita, I loved much of what your poem had to say. The water wonts for you to know and follow. And perhaps, we are talking about more than water here :)

Harshita Chaudhary
Date: 4/17/2019 11:46:00 AM

Yes my friend, water is a source of encouragement for me. Thank you for reading my work

Arturo Michael

Date: 10/8/2017 9:35:00 AM

Yes, Harshita... Keep writing...You have a lot to give to this art form...I enjoyed your poem...As usual, I wish you success in all your endeavors...

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/3/2017 5:25:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this poem ... Smoothly flowing stream ...

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/2/2017 7:48:00 PM

Such a beautiful write Harshita. Lovely lines like; 'With a smile Lucent water, You manifest The magic of sunlight' just pure joy and poetic expression. A lovely write and enjoyed :)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 10/2/2017 3:00:00 PM

Hi Harshita: Your beautiful poem flows like the water. Great Write!