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Silent Desruction

Smooth mountains arise
Breaking the surface roughly
No one hears a sound

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Savannah Rose Harper

September 17, 2009 at 5:26 PM

very vivid detail....

Colin Mitchell Williams

July 24, 2009 at 1:17 PM

Excellent simplicity !

Gareth Heslop

July 22, 2009 at 11:39 AM

very beautiful...i can pitcure myself there.

Ciara Aiyana Ashley-Garn

July 22, 2009 at 11:22 AM

this is very good! its interesting and it speaks to me in a way not very many haiku has spoken before!! i really like this one!! keep 'em coming!! Ciara=)

Ashley Yates

July 8, 2009 at 7:06 PM

So beautiful yet intense... Very nice!

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

June 25, 2009 at 10:21 PM

Dear Cherica Lynn, Welcome To the Soup I've read a few of YOUR POEMS, Quite the new Young Talent I'm Very Impressed I LOVE reading Japanese Form of POETRY This is an Excellent Haiku I will read more of YOU tomorrow (Later Today) YOUR Liege...HG---- W E L C O M E

Juan Onate

June 9, 2009 at 8:42 AM

nice i like the mistery... ur relly good i really like ur poems keep up the awesomenes!!!!!!!=)

Carolyn Devonshire

June 8, 2009 at 4:49 PM

I stopped by to share this one with a friend who's visiting, Cherica. It's such a lovely haiku!

Yoni Dvorkis

June 7, 2009 at 9:45 PM

Beautiful haiku, reminds me of the saying with the tree that falls in the forrest and no one's there to hear it. though my guess is a landslide would be louder..unless I didn't read it right.

Joyce Johnson

June 6, 2009 at 7:31 PM

I like this. Nicely done. Thank you fro reading and commenting on my work. Love, Joyce

Daver Austin

June 5, 2009 at 4:33 AM

Hi, Cherica. Glad ta meetcha. Thanks for reading my stuff. Hey, I'm an old guy - what does rad mean, good or bad? As for your haiku...in the words of the 1920s, I think it is grand. It is swell, Love, daver

Brian Strand

June 4, 2009 at 11:49 PM

Like the enigma in L3 Cherica.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

June 4, 2009 at 3:01 PM

Wonderful use of imagery in this haiku to give the reader a poetic experience. I see you recently joined Poetry Soup. Welcome! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Thank you for taking time to comment on my poem. Best wishes with your writing. Karen