Silent Death

Leaves under my feet
The lonely trees watch them fall
Weeping at the sight
The smell of fall fills the air
As the ground becomes a grave

The trees mourn their loss
Cursing fall's interference
The limbs pay tribute
Swaying in the autumn breeze
Saying farewell to the leaves

Freed from their prison
Racing to meet their purpose
Destiny fulfilled
They rest till they turn to dust
And suddenly disappear
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Taylor Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 6:54 PM
Excellent tanka, Larry. Great entry. Good luck. Ralph
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October 12, 2010 at 5:05 PM
Wow Nice imagery.I can can actually picture the leaving falling from the trees.In Florida we really dont get to see the full effect of fall its just winter and summer lol.Great Tanka you really have a gift with words.Love,Jamecia
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October 12, 2010 at 12:48 PM
Wonderful Tanka entry for Amy...yeah ..she is back... and her contest is glorious...good luck my friend with luv...
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