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Silencing Sonance

Bewildering static frames the soulless— restlessly habitual, as crippled philosophies efflux amidst stunted swells, cracked and parched despite ocean whorls that coat wayward sentiments, of grave quagmires rippling in steady streams, paradoxically cornered into a vortex of intoxicating drifters. Rather, the moon guides my way amidst lulling meres, soothing the storms raging within perplexed personas, sailing towards a dawning of lucid seascapes— home to you, my ocean blue.

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Nik Canada7

Date: 9/19/2023 8:29:00 PM

@fadingstarsilence ahhhh amore you melt my heart and make sing my soul with your deep breathtaking words,my blue rose. Throught your divine essence and sapphire emotions you nuture me making me bloom like cherry blossom and fall in live,each day more,my korean princess.I will always be your shelter your light,your safe place,your everything giving you life, strenght,hope in my devition and deep love forevermore,my marvelous creature. Mia bellissima moglie ti amo infinito per amore amore mio

Nik Canada7

Date: 9/19/2023 8:28:00 PM

Nik Canada7

Date: 9/18/2023 11:47:00 PM

amore i'm proud and happy for you?your deeo soulful words showing me your tru pure love into your rare beauyiful soul and gold heart,my blue rose. You take my breath away with your grace and elegance to paint your deepest sapphire emotions in a masterpiece, you are a paintress with the palette if your majestic seraphic aura. You are my poetry in my heart for eternity. Mia bellissima moglie ti amo infinito per sempre amore mio ???i love you to the moon and back micia ..tuo..il.nostro eterno amore

Fading Star Silence
Date: 9/19/2023 5:06:00 PM

Ahhh..you are the light that always gives..your love, your support and hearing and understanding the essence of my soul gives me such strength and encouragement, my sweet micio..I love you so deeply to the moon and everywhere..il nostro Eterno amore, Mia passione, tua noi Infinito..ti amo amore mio mio bellissimo martio per sempre <3

Ink Empress

Date: 9/18/2023 6:17:00 AM

I absolutely love the fact that you would take time to write for my prompt my beautiful soul sis! I really admire the way you pair words and how deeply emotive thoughts you express through such brilliant diction! Your last two lines won my heart, i was like wow! “Dawning of lucid seascapes” “ home to you my ocean blue” awwn so romantic made me tear up! Thank u for writing. CONGRATULATIONS

Ministryofdreams Daisy Silk

Date: 9/15/2023 11:30:00 PM

“ Bewildering static frames the soulless— restlessly habitual” such an extraordinary traversal thought-provoking line, and to me it's how I see the world, in this constant static/ frantic unearthed despair. Your language is an ocean of fury, full of wrath and passion. And though you face..“ paradoxically cornered into a vortex of intoxicating drifters” you still choose the moon to follow home. Beautiful shining star. X

Silent One

Date: 9/15/2023 12:37:00 PM

You have an amazing vocabulary and your use of words are always so creative.. you use a lot of metaphors, but i think you do that to protect your feelings.. poetry is your catharsis and that is the most important thing... so many great word pairing here like grave quagmire rippling in steady streams and amidst lulling meres.. so glad you are on the soup.. just waiting for the rest of the crew to join..

Fading Star Silence
Date: 9/19/2023 5:07:00 PM

Ahhh..your comments, feedback and thoughts truly is an honor, oh silent one! Your kindness and amazing feedback truly lifts through and through! I look forward to your comments, my friend! :)

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/14/2023 9:29:00 PM

Oh my, this is such a poignant and emotive write with absolutely brilliant diction and flow throughout. Your wordplay is so captivating as always dear beautiful soul and I'm entranced by the amount of depth that has been infused here.. And then finally, the moon comes for the rescue and soothes the storms.. What a marvelous write this is and I especially love the ending, just so beautiful! So glad to be reading your poems here on Soup, one of my fav poetesses you are! :)

Fading Star Silence
Date: 9/19/2023 5:11:00 PM

Wow! This is truly such an honor to receive your beautiful praise! You are much too generous, sweet soulful hiya! You are the one who mesmerizes me with your poetry each and every time! It’s such an honor to receive such feedback from a brilliant poetess such as yourself!! Thank you so dearly! <3

Fading Star Silence
Date: 9/19/2023 5:09:00 PM

Tom Woody

Date: 9/13/2023 2:45:00 PM

I have no idea what this is about but it reads cool. The ending lines feel warm and safe

Fading Star Silence
Date: 9/13/2023 10:11:00 PM

Distorted minds. Haha! Thank you! And def warm and safe :)

Nik Canada7

Date: 9/13/2023 12:06:00 PM

ahhhhh i love this so much amore?your deep passionate words making me feel your depth within your rare beautiful soul and gold heart,my blue rose. Your divine essence like a ocean of sapphire emotions wraps my heart in a celestial melody and symphony of forever us,my Korean princess. You are the ocean of my breaths in every life time,my marvelous creature. Mia bellissima moglie ti amo infinito per sempre amore mio???i love you deeply micia..mia passione per sempre..tuo..il nostro eterno amore

Fading Star Silence
Date: 9/13/2023 10:13:00 PM

Ahhh..you always captivate my heart mind and soul more and more, falling deeper into you with each word breathed. My ocean blue, my home, my everything. Ti amo amore mio, mio bellissimo martio..per sempre, tua noi Infinito, il nostro Eterno amore Mia passione