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Silence's Shout

Silence’s Shout My bones are poisoned by the thirsty soul Darkness is added for the busy mind covered by the emptiness Soak by choke to inhale the breath Silence alarms the quietness to explode Lifting my spirit to create chaos But the conscience counts the beat of my veins every part… I see N and O every time I step my feet in the gate The house of refining sin with the anointed sounds invites my presence Meet the cleaned hands but not at all ‘cause the trouble wakes up the inner story From the place hits slowly the strength to feeble My left is mocking to my weak faith Yes my right! Dance suicidal pointing out my fellows quite innocently assassin Looking innocently but the hallo of an angel is lost! Huh! Hence, I look grotesque in their eyes Criticizing out of their deeds yet unknown For them the red flag is mine Talking without knowing the root from the trees Various fruits are made in one family Yell quietly! Keen the knife! Promulgate your inner to naïve! Take your pride, use your power! Make me nude unconnected sister! Finally, the mask is over Your slimy tongue made you in trouble The words that you spread to the thirsty ears Hence, you are thirsty for a little drop of attention Everybody heard your moaning cry 'coz you sow rock heart To tame your chaotic consciousness You put others into hot spot Feel your burned spirit With the gnashing teeth Tell me! How far our gap? How long your thread? Yes I know how lofty you are! Maybe by your profession but not as us, maturity's under control!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/14/2015 12:01:00 PM
The entanglement of unheard sound. Within a heart that life has bound. Bemoans a journey toward unlit light. And leaves a soul to try and fight. For sanity that never comes. With muted strings the angel strums. Peace. :) Love the muse.
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Date: 4/13/2015 6:54:00 AM
Such honesty and teeth gnashing paints a tense picture, indeed. Well done and welcome back.
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Elai Cee
Date: 4/13/2015 10:41:00 AM
thank u M.L
Date: 9/1/2013 6:26:00 AM
Your poem is moving Elai Cee. Well crafted.
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Date: 8/30/2013 2:50:00 AM
what a poetic raid, elai... do soupy me if you need anything about the dynamics of speech.. :) huggs
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Date: 8/28/2013 7:00:00 AM
You've been away too too long! Hugs, Jack xox
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Date: 8/27/2013 9:27:00 PM
This is exceptional. I am in awe! So much to love about this piece.
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Date: 8/11/2013 11:23:00 AM
hi ella... is this complete?.. looking forward to the final piece..:) huggs.. galing!
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Elai Cee
Date: 8/18/2013 12:20:00 PM
HI ATE Nette ,, quite busy sa school kaya medyo no time for writing. sure te i will finish this. God bless
Date: 8/7/2013 2:53:00 AM
Ah sublime awesome use of figurative lang in wondrous poem! Do read me latest too.
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Date: 8/1/2013 2:44:00 AM
got me hanging on a thread, now i must get off the rack, and plant a few thumb tacks, on my teacher bottom to hit the sack
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Date: 7/29/2013 1:01:00 PM
keeping me on my toes, elai... what's happens next?.. this is creatively done, yes!..:) huggs
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Date: 7/27/2013 4:26:00 AM
Elai cee, long time no see, and this seems a tremendous work!!
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Date: 7/26/2013 11:40:00 PM
a very powerful poem this is!! love that last line.
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Date: 7/21/2013 9:28:00 AM
Gorgeous, yet elements of darkness. Ah, the power of silence in all its revelations. This was awesome! So cool to see a new poem from you!!! =D
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Date: 7/21/2013 5:35:00 AM
- Elai, thanks for your touching and well written poem .... well done! - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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