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Silenceful

silence is full of expectancy and hope of morn and night of light and dark of song and tears of life and death sometimes my silence is as full as a bottomless bath in the arms of my lover his heartbeat to mine so soothingly reassuring AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on February 8, 2019 for CONTEST 555 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST Originally posted on October 15, 2018

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Date: 2/10/2019 11:19:00 AM
Wow-- this is cool--you're seeing with the eyes of your soul, Line....
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/10/2019 12:25:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely visit and compliment, LJ.
Date: 10/16/2018 3:35:00 PM
More great imagery; you do short poetry very well.
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Date: 2/10/2019 12:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, ML, for the lovely visit and compliment.
Date: 10/16/2018 10:47:00 AM
I try to bring silence into children's worlds, but sometimes other adults cannot stand the silence which I do not understand as I crave it.
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Date: 10/16/2018 11:16:00 AM
Funny indeed, many people are afraid of both solitude and silence. Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren. Keep trying.
Date: 10/16/2018 2:58:00 AM
As the song says " Silence is Golden" I like this poem. :)
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Date: 10/16/2018 5:27:00 AM
And so true. Thanks for your visit and comment, Timothy.
Date: 10/15/2018 2:55:00 PM
Echoing D.M's comment, it is in the deepest silence that one can truly listen and hear. Well conceived and well penned, Line! :) gw
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Date: 10/15/2018 4:08:00 PM
My appreciation for silence has so grown immensely in the last year. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Gershon.
Date: 10/15/2018 11:51:00 AM
Nice, only in the silence can you hear it, the beat of yours and every heart.
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Date: 10/15/2018 12:09:00 PM
So true, DM. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment.

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