Silenceful

silence is full 
of expectancy and hope
of morn and night
of light and dark
of song and tears
of life and death

sometimes
my silence is as full
as a bottomless bath
in the arms of my lover
his heartbeat to mine
soothingly reassuring




AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on February 8, 2019 for CONTEST 555 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Carber Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 11:19 AM
Wow-- this is cool--you're seeing with the eyes of your soul, Line....
Gauthier Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 12:25 PM
Thank you for the lovely visit and compliment, LJ.
Kiser Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 3:35 PM
More great imagery; you do short poetry very well.
Gauthier Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 12:26 PM
Thank you so much, ML, for the lovely visit and compliment.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 10:47 AM
I try to bring silence into children's worlds, but sometimes other adults cannot stand the silence which I do not understand as I crave it.
Gauthier Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 11:16 AM
Funny indeed, many people are afraid of both solitude and silence. Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren. Keep trying.
Mcguire Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 2:58 AM
As the song says " Silence is Golden" I like this poem. :)
Gauthier Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 5:27 AM
And so true. Thanks for your visit and comment, Timothy.
Wolf Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 2:55 PM
Echoing D.M's comment, it is in the deepest silence that one can truly listen and hear. Well conceived and well penned, Line! :) gw
Gauthier Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 4:08 PM
My appreciation for silence has so grown immensely in the last year. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Gershon.
Babbit Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 11:51 AM
Nice, only in the silence can you hear it, the beat of yours and every heart.
Gauthier Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 12:09 PM
So true, DM. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment.
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