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Silenced

my mind
clouded like these skies
as morning arises
in misted breaths
in the wake
of her death

June 28 2021

Bite sized poem #9 contest

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Date: 7/2/2021 8:26:00 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/1/2021 11:50:00 AM
"Wonderful" What an ending. Good Luck in the contest. Have a blessed day..............
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Date: 6/29/2021 8:01:00 PM
Ooh! Packs a time-release punch, Sandra. ~ Solar-plexed
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Date: 6/29/2021 1:55:00 AM
It is always pleasant when I see a poem of yours, Sandra. You are missed. Hugs.
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Date: 6/28/2021 12:05:00 PM
You captured that feeling well Sandra, that spaced out and dark feeling after the loss of a loved one. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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