Silenced

my mind
clouded like these skies
as morning arises
in misted breaths
in the wake
of her death

June 28 2021

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Alex Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 8:26 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 11:50 AM
"Wonderful" What an ending. Good Luck in the contest. Have a blessed day..............
Wolf Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 8:01 PM
Ooh! Packs a time-release punch, Sandra. ~ Solar-plexed
Buhagiar Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 1:55 AM
It is always pleasant when I see a poem of yours, Sandra. You are missed. Hugs.
Cunningham Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 12:05 PM
You captured that feeling well Sandra, that spaced out and dark feeling after the loss of a loved one. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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