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Silence Swaps Vexation

I have realised shortly that "silence"is one of my defence mechanism. At times when sprayed by anger I drape my outfit silence. Yes, I veil my emotions with quietude. There are lot of aggression boiling inside powerful mind which is compressed in my conscience. When somebody don't value my words I don't argue, instead ignore them and prefer being silent. Soundlessness combined with darkness often impresses me and brings solace. Life is full of frosty thorns while you try adjusting with irresistible people and their place. The only way to smoothen the spines is to smear them with your calmness and patience only up to the extent that you can bear.If those don't turn into petal soft then, slice and smash them with single dare without any care. 23-6-2020 Second Place in the Contest:-) Note: Written for Reflection in Silence Poetry Contest Sponsor: Silence Is Like Elated Nerves Tethered.. Over Nasty Ears

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Funom Makama

Date: 6/29/2020 2:02:00 PM

A huge huge congratulations on your high placement. You deserve it.

V. Deepa
Date: 6/30/2020 6:49:00 AM

Hello sir, Thankyou very much for the lovely appreciation like always.:-)Am glad know that you spend little of your precious time to read my poems. Keep inspiring.Bestwishes~ Deepa:-)

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/26/2020 5:51:00 AM

I love the powerful message through your words Deepa. It is true sometimes we need to be silent yet we need not succumb ourselves to torment and rise to shatter that silence when required. Love the creative presentation. Congratulations on your win. Keep writing and inspiring. Blessings and lots of love :)

V. Deepa
Date: 6/26/2020 3:18:00 PM

Dear Aditi mam, Thankyou very much for this wonderful review. I am glad to know you loved my message. Yes true words when we succumb ourselves to torment it might shove us into depression too. Am pleased to know that you loved my muse and presentation.:-) Best wishes for you too. Keep inspiring.Much Love~Deepa:-)

James Inman

Date: 6/25/2020 1:10:00 PM

Enjoyed your write V. Nice shape as well.

V. Deepa
Date: 6/25/2020 1:50:00 PM

Hello sir, Thankyou for the visit. I am glad to know that you enjoyed my poem and its shape.:-) Best wishes for all your works too. Keep inspiring.Take care.Warm regards~Deepa:-)

Silent One

Date: 6/25/2020 6:49:00 AM

Very creative.. Well done... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

V. Deepa
Date: 6/25/2020 1:47:00 PM

Hello Sir, Thankyou very much for your constant motivation and appreciation.:-) This work of mine is completely dedicated to you. Your user name triggered my thoughts to leak.:-) Keep inspiring.Best Wishes. Take care.Warm regards~Deepa.:-)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/23/2020 9:06:00 PM

I can totally relate to you putting up a veil of silence. I do the same thing if I am being yelled at. I think it deescalates the situation. A very good poem V. If for the contest, I think it will do very well. Blessings xxoo

V. Deepa
Date: 6/24/2020 3:54:00 AM

Hello mam, Thankyou for your generous appreciation and encouragement:-).Yes betimes we all put up a veil of silence to stay away from annoying situations.:-) Actually it's good for health When we stop arguing and inhale silence as the state of meditation.:-) Have a nice day.Take care. With love~Deepa

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/23/2020 6:51:00 PM

Hello Deepa, you know silence is so quite - you can almost hear it. Enjoy your evening my friend. love Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/24/2020 2:04:00 PM

Helllo Depa, Deepa you know sometimes we need to sit in the dark and listen to silence. to calm our thoughts. i do the same thing. Enjoy your day my friend. love Darlene.

V. Deepa
Date: 6/24/2020 3:48:00 AM

Hello Darlene mam, Yes true. Sometimes I sit in dark, hear to it and attain solace.:-) Have a bright day. Take care.Much love~Deepa:-)