Silence Please

one two three keep counting then lose track exhaustion is a way for release simpler is be quiet bliss fills us

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Bill Baker

Date: 7/2/2023 3:35:00 PM

I agree my friend, as the Bible says, "Be still and know that I am God." The stillness brings the bliss of being in the presence of Love. Simple and True. I like it and will add it to my FAVs list. Write On! my friend. Bill

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/2/2023 5:16:00 PM

Oh! I didn’t know that was a bible quote … yes, here it is ~ Psalm 46.10 - https://www.compassionuk.org/blogs/be-still-and-know-that-i-am-god/

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/2/2023 8:46:00 AM

Do you suffer from insomnia? After my fall (I still feel some pain). I have to drink a lot of water. Sometimes I fail to go back to sleep at night. Nothing helps except getting up and writing some romantic poem. Loved your poem, Seeker.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/2/2023 10:50:00 AM

Thanks Victor. No, I don’t have sleeping difficulties. In my view, if you get up at night, don’t fight it, just be still, enjoy, meditate, nuzzle the void and drift into sleep slowly :)

Sand Blown

Date: 7/1/2023 3:40:00 PM

...nice write......cofcofcof...yes....wowza cofcof....must be.....huhrrrrrrmmmph.... simply...q u i e t.........stan : )

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/1/2023 6:41:00 PM

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 7/1/2023 10:42:00 AM

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