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Silence of My Shadow

SILENCE OF MY SHADOW WAS TELLING ME SOMETHING IS THIS ME IN DARK OR LIGHT IS MISSING? SILENCE STOOD STILL WHEN SHADOWS WERE FADING ENTERED IN AN ETERNITY WHERE ESSENCE WAS FOLLOWING SILENCE OF MY SHADOW WAS TELLING ME SOMETHING ARE YOU CRAVING FOR THE TOUCH OR TOUCHING ME SOMETHING ENCUMBERED BY THE YEARN OF HEART...MY DESIRES WERE WANDERING FOLLOWING THE SILENCE....SHADOWS WERE DISAPPEARING ARE YOU PART OF ME ? AM I PART OF YOU? NOTHING AND EVERYTHING WENT TOGETHER FOR A WHILE SILENCE OF MY SHADOW WAS WALKING IN AN AISLE. SHADOW ASKED ME SOMETHING WHEN NOTHING LEFT TO SAY IT WAS THE SILENCE IN THE AIR WHERE NO ONE WAS THERE I SAW MYSELF IN THE SHADOW AND IN REAL ONLY DARKNESS WAS EVIDENT WHEN THE LIGHT BECAME UNREAL

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Date: 2/21/2016 8:16:00 PM
Hardik, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Hardik Shah
Date: 6/30/2018 1:34:00 PM
Thank you Linda
Date: 12/31/2015 10:40:00 PM
:) skat
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Date: 7/20/2013 12:38:00 PM
Hi Hardik, waiting for another post. thank you for the soup mail....SKAT
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Date: 7/9/2013 12:35:00 PM
Hardik, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/8/2013 7:46:00 AM
very nice poem ,and enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 7/8/2013 4:40:00 AM
- Hello Hardik - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)
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Hardik Shah
Date: 6/30/2018 1:35:00 PM
Thank you

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