Sotto Poet Poet Haiku

Silence of Ischemia Dreams-Hiku 27-

Written: July 23, for Contest by Broan Strand

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ischemia      d   
                         r   
                             e
                                 a
                                      m
                                           s


                                               s
quiet   g  a                             n
             r    d                       i
                e   n                  e
                    s     in  the  v


where  r   o
           s   e
             s       
             |
             |
           \\|//          don’t    *b  l*
                                       *o o*
                                           *m*
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Andrea Dietrich July 24, 2025 at 3:29 PM Beautiful, Sotto. Congrats

Duke Beaufort July 24, 2025 at 9:28 AM SP, very interesting combination of concepts. A quiet garden in the veins gives us a lot to think about. Hopefully leads to sweet dreams and not anything bad.

Sara Kendrick July 24, 2025 at 4:06 AM Back with congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara K

Paige Hind July 23, 2025 at 7:49 PM Very deep. Never heard of that condition before - you placed it in just the right places :)

Bill Baker July 23, 2025 at 7:10 PM These shaped Haikus are amazing to me. I could never do this. Nice going, my friend. Bill

sara Etgen-Baker July 23, 2025 at 4:09 PM love this 'scattering' effect used with your Haiku. Outstanding!

Paula Goldsmith July 23, 2025 at 1:11 PM What a creative/fun ~ write/shape you have here. Love the fun you have here... "Good Luck" Have a lovely day writing away.........

Jay Narain July 23, 2025 at 11:34 AM Great haiku.

Sara Kendrick July 23, 2025 at 11:21 AM Interesting work. I guess maybe for a contest. Way to go. Roses that don't bloom I would think could be called brambles/briers. Sara K