Silence in the Cemetery


Written: May 28, 2025, for contest: Sponsored by: Constance La France Quote: "If you come to visit my grave, my tomb will appear to dance."By Rumi ************** Standing rocks that mimic megaliths rise, Indicating where the eroding skull lies. She was once a mother suckling with grace, Now her bones swathed in clay, no embrace. I was saddened to view this forlorn grave, Infested by weeds that struggle to save. The grass is dormant, giving way to seed, In hushed sadness, I ponder and plead. A father's shape, badly wrecked and torn, His spirit, through rain and labor, had worn. Typhus took a son, the hoped-for next, There is no bloodline to rely on in a text. A bright young daughter is now dead, Struggling to deal with pregnancy dread. Upon labor and loss, she faced searing harm, Cradling in sorrow the one once so warm. As we stroll through this calm cemetery, unwind, Where mother, father, daughter, and son all lined. Resting alone, with names engraved on stone, I await and ponder when my body will be prone.
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Date: 5/30/2025 12:01:00 AM
An excellent poem worthy of top placement in the contest. Wishing you best luck, dear poet. The poem reminds us that we are all temporary travellers on earth and when the bell will knell or us, like autumn leaves, we will kiss the ground.
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Date: 5/29/2025 1:33:00 AM
I can't help it but I go to cemeteries only for relatives. A poem full of emotion.
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Date: 5/28/2025 6:13:00 PM
That is the way of cemetaries, every single stone has a story beneath of a life lived and now ended. The grasses, weeds and time itself hide the one beneath, but their lives have so much to tell, if they could but speak. This was sad Sotto. Well written and pondering.
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Date: 5/28/2025 1:35:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful yet sad "Silence in the Cemetery" write. Great ending with many names waiting to add our name. "Good Luck" Looks like we both did this one. Have a blessed day writing away..........
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Date: 5/28/2025 11:22:00 AM
A beautiful poem- it was different, because you used "mother, father, son, daughter" in a row...what a concept, that's comforting...and then you pondered when it's your time...love this
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