Silent One Poet Free verse

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Silence Cries For My Untouched Lover

Death's malodor dances 
with winds of lament

heart wonders, mind ponders

watching sunset lose her grace,
time has become an adversary,

pulsating in our misfortune,
orchestrating a tragedy of love

heart wonders, mind ponders

in the hope of tomorrow,
silence cries for my untouched lover.

How unjust life would be
if my last sigh was not in her presence

heart wonders, mind ponders

pangs of passion plead, 
to gaze into her eyes,
to lose myself in her scent,
to kiss the gloss of her lips,
to merge like ink and paper.

Devoted in an euphoric embrace,
illuminating like a perpetual rainbow

but

Romeo's curse contaminates our destiny -
her heart weeps, searching for a cure.

Simple Musing
Silent One
28 March 2020

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Angela Crabtree November 20, 2020 at 9:53 PM A beautiful poem, Silent One. I love the way you integrated Romeo with this :)

Gideon Foli May 2, 2020 at 8:29 PM The lover's heart is full of songs! What a lovely piece of work. Stay safe and enjoy your day my beautiful friend. Love and hugs.

Phyllis Babcock April 7, 2020 at 1:08 PM Can feel the longing of the heart for what could have been but was not. love phyl

Paul Callus April 3, 2020 at 1:45 PM I can feel the longing, S-1. Time, distance and fate are main actors in this tragedy of love. Regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux March 31, 2020 at 9:21 AM You have skills Silent. Wow!

Mystic Rose Rose March 30, 2020 at 5:13 PM Sad by dipped with tender words of affectionate. I hope she finds the cure, xo

Connie Marcum Wong March 30, 2020 at 4:02 PM A tragedy of love....very well expressed in these Troubling times. Beautifully poignant Silent. Have a great day! xxoo

Paghunda Zahid March 30, 2020 at 3:59 PM Beautifully written!!

Panagiota Romios March 30, 2020 at 1:03 PM A wonderful poem, my friend. Great artistry. Panagiota xx

Arturo Michael March 29, 2020 at 2:14 PM "Heart wonders and mind ponders" the dilemma of these days...Nicely placed through the write...A true reflection of the times...Well done

Andrea Dietrich March 29, 2020 at 1:43 PM I really enjoyed the comparison of this to Romeo's curse. Great writing, Silent One. So eloquent.

Juliet Ligon March 29, 2020 at 11:45 AM It would be so hard to be separated from your love because of the virus. Your poem powerfully displays the tragedy. I love the Romeo reference. Silent One March 29, 2020 at 12:32 PM Thank you... It is difficult for those who are not together..

Charlie Smith March 29, 2020 at 11:19 AM Separation is it's own disease, great work SO... Silent One March 29, 2020 at 12:32 PM Indeed... Thank you Charlie..

Maria Williams March 29, 2020 at 1:42 AM Amazingly expressed Si, love the way your repeated line 'heart wonders, mind ponders ' adds more depth to the uncertainty of true to life situations played out in so many parts of the world right now. So many people are separated, so many lovers wonder if they will ever see each other again. Great song choice. A gem...Maria Hugs Silent One March 29, 2020 at 12:42 PM Thank you Maria.. who ever said love is easy hey..

Allright Poet March 29, 2020 at 1:41 AM Sensitive and delicate. That is what muse is all about. Silent One March 29, 2020 at 12:42 PM Thank you..

Brandy Nicole March 28, 2020 at 10:47 PM Your thoughts caress this video perfectly. That sweet ache to be with the one you love- if the world should end. We truly have no way of knowing. Many blessings to you my friend. Stay safe. ~ Brandy Silent One March 29, 2020 at 12:45 PM fitting for today... thank you Brandy

Sandra Adams March 28, 2020 at 10:27 PM this one made me think of some of the stories I have seen of those passing alone... so sad, but so true to life is this one my friend... excellent penning! hugs Silent One March 29, 2020 at 12:45 PM And so many are at the moment... Thank you Sandy

Joseph May March 28, 2020 at 5:19 PM Romeo brings the 'tragedy of love', lost in destiny, Well written Silent Silent One March 29, 2020 at 12:48 PM Thank you... another love tragedy...

Kim Rodrigues March 28, 2020 at 4:52 PM Truly sad! We need human contact! Hopefully this will pass sooner than later! Silent One March 29, 2020 at 12:49 PM I hope so..

Jc Hawkens March 28, 2020 at 3:54 PM Thank you Silent one for this beautiful read. I hope all is well with you. Silent One March 29, 2020 at 12:50 PM Thank you JC.. All is well.. hope all is well with you..

Besma Riabi Dziri March 28, 2020 at 10:49 AM When the heart is anchored in an ocean of love and the mind weaves a net of a promising life.. then a howling wind heralds a mighty storm.. Our senses get infected and "Death's malodor dances with winds of lament".. So expressive amazing poetry, Silent One! You take your reader to the core of human nature when infected with the incurable! So profound thoughts of many a reading! Always a great pleasure reading your wonderful poetry.. stay safe. Best regards and blessings. Silent One March 29, 2020 at 6:24 AM It is love that is tested the most in these times... thank you..

Heidi Sands March 28, 2020 at 10:47 AM This is so powerful and true for so many. It reached me deeply. Well written Silent One. Stay strong and please be safe. Keep on writing. You are talented and your poems reach many people. Bless you :) Silent One March 29, 2020 at 6:20 AM Thank you for your kind words... all we have is hope... be strong my friend..

Darlene De Beaulieu March 28, 2020 at 10:42 AM Hello silent One, yes she weeps for a cure. I feel the sadness in this poem. Be strong, be well, Stay healthy. Enjoy your day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu March 30, 2020 at 8:27 AM Hello Silent One, yes love can be sad sometimes. This is true. i agree. Keep well, be strong, stay well. Enjoy your day my friend. Silent One March 29, 2020 at 5:10 AM Love can be sad sometimes... Thank you..

Kelli White March 28, 2020 at 10:20 AM Beautiful devotion in times of darkness love remains SO, love Kelli Silent One March 29, 2020 at 5:09 AM Thank you..

Tom Cunningham March 28, 2020 at 9:59 AM It's sad that in the coming days many who have lost a partner will pass on alone but for many they may see it as a release. Stay safe, a doctor in London is predicting a tsunami in the next few weeks. Two hospitals being built along with NHS Nightingale, Bham Airport being prepared as a morgue. Stay safe. Tom Silent One March 29, 2020 at 5:09 AM It will only get worse as according to doctors we have not even hit the peak yet... sad times... be strong and be safe my friend..

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