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Silence

These words were written for a handicap brother who lived in a group home, basking in the sun, swinging in his hammock as he coped with his limits until he passed away. Silence Untangled, unseen matter Quiet, still and numb Frozen, mute with pain Is silence around me. Not a flitter, not a chirp Nor twitching of limbs Motionless trees over-shadow me As my hammock swings. Clouds gently steel across the sky Leaving velvety blue protruding, Through soft woolly cotton balls I gaze the Heavens dreaming Slumbering lazily, in my hammock Entertained by a million thoughts Sad, lonely, fearful struggles Bouncing through my aching heart. Come softly, soothe these nagging fears. Shatter the tumult within Come dispel the silent flurry While my hammock swings.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/27/2024 6:00:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 4/7/2018 2:51:00 AM
Susan, your imagery, your love for your brother, your sweet concern, and love for nature are all clearly flowing from this poem into my heart. Kudos to you, my friend. nicely done.
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Date: 2/4/2018 1:11:00 AM
Your words really touched my heart.
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Date: 1/21/2018 1:19:00 PM
Hello Susan,the handicap people do suffer in pain quietly. Yet they do the best they can to pass the time of day.Have a nice dy my friend.
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Date: 1/20/2018 4:56:00 PM
Silence is golden. And you have made it so. May it, your heart embolden. To make your writing glow. Thank you kindly for sharing.
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Date: 1/19/2018 11:42:00 AM
Susan, thank you for sharing. LINDA
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Date: 1/12/2018 11:57:00 AM
Heartfelt write. Enjoyed immensely. Great pen.
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