Silence

Unspoken words linger on my mind. Silence cried a river of tears Perhaps those are unwritten words ought to be read in everyone's hearts.

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Jett Franco

Date: 11/9/2012 8:42:00 PM

nice brevity Cheryl.. perfect piece! galing talaga regards, jett

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/30/2012 10:32:00 AM

oh my, cheryl.. the language of silence runs deep in your remarkable verse... salamat sa pagbati.. sana nga, mabuhay muli ang harana!..:) winning huggs!..:)

Laila Andresen Mjelde

Date: 8/30/2012 1:54:00 AM

wow! love it!!! xoxo - Laila

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/21/2012 1:39:00 AM

Good write, but your word "everyone" could use an apostrophe and an "s" for a proper appearance. Also, place a period after "mind" and start a new sentence with "silence" having a capital "s". In the second line, remove the comma and the word "are".

Cheryl Aldea
Date: 8/21/2012 2:17:00 AM

Thanks for the comment Robert...