Joseph May Poet Rhyme

Silence

Allow all sounds to slowly fade, until they're obsolete
 Then let the silence echo, and when that  is complete
 Become one with quietude as you blissfully retreat
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Carol Sunshine Brown August 29, 2012 at 10:10 AM Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Silence Please" contest Joseph. Love, Carol

Vicky Tsiluma August 27, 2012 at 3:06 AM Congrats Joseph! I REAllY liked this one!

Sara Kendrick August 26, 2012 at 5:27 PM Great thoughts penned..Congrats on your win..Sara

Barbara Gorelick August 26, 2012 at 12:25 PM Congrats Joseph...well done. BG

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl August 26, 2012 at 7:13 AM Congratulations on your splendid win Joseph xx

Poet Destroyer A August 25, 2012 at 8:36 PM JM;-) congratulations with your awesome entry In Susan's " SILENCE " contest. take care~ PD

Kim Merryman August 25, 2012 at 8:19 PM I like this, Joseph. Very good! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Lee Ramage August 25, 2012 at 6:16 PM You make it sound so easy, well done. Congratulations on this win. Lee

Andrea Dietrich August 25, 2012 at 1:13 PM wow, this is the one that sounds so transcendental!! Cool poem on silence. Big congrats in the contest.

Terry O'Leary August 25, 2012 at 10:50 AM Very nice... Congratulations on your win... Terry

Andrea Dietrich August 15, 2012 at 7:56 PM hey,this is a splendid entry for the contest! Joseph May August 16, 2012 at 11:03 AM thank you Andrea

Sherese Gooden August 15, 2012 at 6:24 PM Just what I need at the moment. Beautiful. Joseph May August 16, 2012 at 11:03 AM thank you Sherese

Laila Andresen Mjelde August 15, 2012 at 2:20 PM Beautiful written, Joseph, enjoyed it! hugs- Laila Joseph May August 16, 2012 at 11:03 AM Thank you Laila

Len Gasun August 14, 2012 at 10:10 PM Yes! This is absolutely amazing and wonderful! I love the picture here. Good luck Joseph May. Joseph May August 16, 2012 at 11:02 AM Thank you Leonora

Kash Poet August 14, 2012 at 8:14 PM Wonderful Joseph!Loved it. Joseph May August 16, 2012 at 11:02 AM thank you Kash

Vicky Tsiluma August 14, 2012 at 3:51 PM This definitely echoes the word great. I like the steps leading up to the retreat. It makes the silence more profound because it doesn't come snappily. Nice! Joseph May August 14, 2012 at 6:09 PM thank you for those wonderful words Vicky....I appreciate it a lot