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Silence

Silence falls as the windows close to cold air when the baby sleeps she sits alone hands idle unable to write music or even listen to the symphonies in her head she is lost in the silence more lost than she knows careless pregnancy she hides in the exhaustion of young parenthood unable to embrace personal success and her life will pass in this most useless way her music unheard her voice unsung

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/18/2010 3:59:00 PM
unwanted and too soon, although she has good family support and a loving husband, they know they are unprepared to be parents, having just been married. The hope for years together to build their relationship is gone, and life is so hard anyway....thanks for the comment....
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Date: 10/18/2010 11:35:00 AM
Zera, I'm sorry your niece has had to experience an unwanted pregnancy. I hope the family has been able to offer her support during this difficult time. Genuinely moving poem. This happens so often. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/11/2010 10:22:00 PM
You paint an excellent picture of the disappointment her life has become in one too young to have a baby. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/3/2010 10:43:00 AM
yes my niece...unfortunately.
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