Hina Patel Poet Free verse

Silence

Without you
This night is utterly long
Nothing but deep silence
That speaks your name


And repeats it softly
Again and again
Yet a burning candle in the corner
Burns me within as well


Without you tonight
Eyes weeps calmly
And heart mourns quietly


yet this night
Speaks nothing but silence.

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Chacko Itticheria March 1, 2010 at 3:52 PM Nice poetry Hina,beautifully presented.The loneliness and longing of the heart is very well expressed.Best wishes. Chacko

Tapan Sanyal February 23, 2010 at 9:36 PM nice one dear keep writing

Carol Sunshine Brown February 19, 2010 at 6:53 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Hina. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 18, 2010 at 7:14 PM Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... please continue to share your creative writes with us all..as this delight tonight.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..

Carolyn Devonshire February 18, 2010 at 6:30 PM This describes so well the overpowering feeling of longing. Beautifully writen, Hina. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Best Wishes, Carolyn

Kaye Locke February 18, 2010 at 12:15 PM such sadness in your words Hina. beautifully conveyed sentiment. I'm new to poetry soup too. Its nice to be so encouraged and welcomed! have fun writing! k