Silence

Without you This night is utterly long Nothing but deep silence That speaks your name And repeats it softly Again and again Yet a burning candle in the corner Burns me within as well Without you tonight Eyes weeps calmly And heart mourns quietly yet this night Speaks nothing but silence.

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Chacko Itticheria

Date: 3/1/2010 3:52:00 PM

Nice poetry Hina,beautifully presented.The loneliness and longing of the heart is very well expressed.Best wishes. Chacko

Tapan Sanyal

Date: 2/23/2010 9:36:00 PM

nice one dear keep writing

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/19/2010 6:53:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Hina. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/18/2010 7:14:00 PM

Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... please continue to share your creative writes with us all..as this delight tonight.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/18/2010 6:30:00 PM

This describes so well the overpowering feeling of longing. Beautifully writen, Hina. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Best Wishes, Carolyn

Kaye Locke

Date: 2/18/2010 12:15:00 PM

such sadness in your words Hina. beautifully conveyed sentiment. I'm new to poetry soup too. Its nice to be so encouraged and welcomed! have fun writing! k