Notes About The Poem

For contest sponsored by Craig Cornish

Silence

Soft blue wind blows cottony clouds
In them I look for beloved’s face
Love never dies but bodies transition
Energy from one place to the unknown
Never can say goodbye 
Cherish the memories and laughter
Even when the silence is so loud
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Rodrigues Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 12:54 PM
The silence is so loud! I try not to hear it. Hugs
Jones Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 1:06 PM
Aw so sorry for you! Hugs
Empress Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 6:38 AM
How beautiful and soulful dear karen, youv written so well for the contest prompt, and i love the lines "Cherish the memories and laughter Even when the silence is so loud" that hits so deep and is so inspiring: sometimes amidst all we forget to appreciate laugh and cherish little things in life. Youv reminded us all through your acrostic! Best wishes! Sending you light always
Jones Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 12:02 PM
Thanks dear Inky! Your comments warm my heart! Love and light to you as well!
mysore Avatar
June 2, 2025 at 6:36 AM
effortless write dear friend, 'love never dies' beautiful lines. happy writing!
Jones Avatar
June 2, 2025 at 1:30 PM
Thanks so much for the compliment! Happy writing as well!
Alhemaidy Avatar
June 2, 2025 at 1:25 AM
Very enjoyed write!
Jones Avatar
June 2, 2025 at 1:29 PM
So glad you enjoyed Abdullah!
Mendoza Avatar
June 1, 2025 at 9:42 PM
Hello Karen, how are yah? Arostic poem I did one years ago with my name and it's sort of long. I'm learning Rhyming but it's hard esp. when English is ur 2nd language, I did try with my recent poem "My Love" I'm just getting to know people. I invite u to my poetrysoup hp and maybe comment on it. Thanks in advance.~Jac
Jones Avatar
June 1, 2025 at 11:31 PM
Hi Jaqueline!
Goldsmith Avatar
June 1, 2025 at 11:01 AM
What a powerful "Silence" write you have here. FAV for me... "Good Luck" Have a blessed day writing away.........
Jones Avatar
June 1, 2025 at 2:22 PM
Wow! I’m honored by your Fav! Thanks Paula you made my day! Be blessed as well!
Poet Avatar
June 1, 2025 at 10:42 AM
WOW, Karen such an incredible poem with fantastic diction and metaphor layers. Best wishes for the contest.
Jones Avatar
June 1, 2025 at 2:21 PM
Aw thank you Sotto Poet. :0)
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