Silence

I thought it could be special
the way it started out
a beginning in my mind
that somehow got messed up
not saying enough
but saying to much
volumes spoken in silence
not enough questions asked
not enough feelings shared
when the door closed
my heart left on the threshold
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 3:49 AM
Sounds sad. Keep writing. Sara
Gilmore Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 2:03 AM
I THOUGHT THIS POEM WAS PRETTY GOOD. IT SAIID LIKE IT CAME FROM YHE BOTTOM AND I MEAN DEEP INSIDE OF YOUR HEART AND YOU MENT EVRY WORD YOU MENT .GOOD JOB!!
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