Silence

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Night silence,
so much you have to say,
afraid of listening to
my past grieves,
let me sleep again.

Night silence,
once more you wake me up,
you bring me back 
many thoughts I want to forget,
just keep quiet for me to sleep.

Night silence,
you are becoming 
a noisy nightmare,
wake me up then,
so as I can see 
the blue sea
to get some calm.

Morning silence,
you welcome my days
with the the robins' songs,
let me get up
to look at a new horizon, 
so as I can find 
a better silence 
to be listened at nights.

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/14/2024 11:20:00 AM

Brilliant. I enjoy silence. Makes me think and perhaps find some poem to write. Thoroughly enjoyed. Blessings.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 7/15/2024 2:38:00 AM

Good afternoon Victor. Thank you so much for your kind comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope you are doing well fighting the high temperatures there in Malta. I thought that you usually had hot weather there. I've never been to Malta. Up here, we still have changing weather, clouds, some rain and around 24°C. Nice, as I don't like too much when it's too hot. Well my friend, I hope you have a nice week.!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/12/2024 1:16:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful yet sad "silence" write. The night can be very silence and hard to live through. The new morning brings the sunlight. Have a great day..................

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 7/12/2024 1:21:00 PM

My dear Paula, thanks a lot for your lovely and kind comment. You are right, sometimes nights can become difficult. Have a blessed day my friend!.