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A Sam Scott poem:
18th November 2023
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Deafening Disturbance Does Dolefully Dictate a Detraction Dancing Diligently Despite the Daring Departure Decision; for Diminution of Distance, Derogation of Distraction, Depreciation of Diversion all Determine Dedication Devout Disciples Douse in Dreams of Deity in a Developing Delicate Silent Desire towards Delightful Devotion of the Divine

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/3/2024 6:10:00 AM

Creative work. Someone must have had or is having a contest about alliteration. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Sam Scott
Date: 1/3/2024 6:20:00 AM

I do recall that I was sitting in the coffee shop in Gorton Monastery during a time of reflection (that also involved cake!)

Sam Scott
Date: 1/3/2024 6:20:00 AM

You are very kind, Sara x Not sure if there was a comp sometimes the mood just takes you there. I think I picked a good letter too :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/18/2023 4:03:00 PM

I'm impressed, Sam. What an awesome Alliteration poem!! This is one of the most creative alliterative poems I've seen in quite some time. I loved 'deafening disturbance' = captivated me from the get go. Wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara

Sam Scott
Date: 11/18/2023 11:55:00 PM

Sara x you are so very kind :)) Had to shuffle around a bit to improve the flow but they are a fun challenge. Stay well x

Ink Empress

Date: 11/18/2023 1:54:00 AM

Whoa this is brilliant, you did alliteration so well and described silence so profoundly. Well read and written. I especially love the opening lines with deafening etc and also the ending where you wrote “ silent devotion toward delightful devotion of the divine. Excellent moving write. You’ve been very silent here. Hope all is well. Sending you light always. Pleasure reading you after a while

Sam Scott
Date: 11/18/2023 9:56:00 AM

(I think I picked an easy first first letter tbh)

Sam Scott
Date: 11/18/2023 9:55:00 AM

Hi there, Inky friend, life has been pretty full of late but thankyou for asking. Poetry is sometimes a harbour for the soul when the journey gets wild and storms blow.. all is indeed well. I hope also with you :)