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signs of autumn

equinox arrives as amber hues, crimson shades adorn maple trees oaks release acorns which are strewn across the ground squirrels sweet treasure harvest moon aglow as pumpkins with impish grins carve out halloween

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/22/2024 6:38:00 AM

I am delighted to see your Haiku on the winners' list. Nicely descriptive winning lines penned. Way to go. Back with congratulations. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2024 11:00:00 PM

Back with my congrats. I love seeing winner lists like these

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/8/2024 1:13:00 PM

Joseph, congratulations on your winning placement with your charming haiku set.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/1/2024 4:40:00 AM

Reads like a winning contribution to the contest. Way to go. I enjoyed reading your descriptions of fall. Thanks for sharing. Sara K..soupmail

Joseph May
Date: 10/8/2024 2:14:00 PM

Thank you for my placement Tania

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/30/2024 12:45:00 AM

Oh my, what a breathtaking autumnal poem this is, dear Joseph. I absolutely love all these hues of fall which you've painted along with the cozy atmosphere where squirrels dance with acorns ~ simply beautiful! "as amber hues, crimson shades adorn maple trees", "harvest moon aglow as pumpkins with impish grins carve out halloween" Adore this, so gorgeously inked with incredible imagery... Wonderful chain of haiku! Glad to be reading your work after a long time.. Sending best wishes ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2024 12:58:00 PM

Indeed, Joseph. These are wonderful signs of autumn

Paul Callus

Date: 9/27/2024 1:59:00 AM

All these 3-liners point to a beloved season which gifts many of us with inspiration, Joseph. I'd love to watch squirrels at work, but we have none in Malta. ~ Regards // paul

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/26/2024 9:37:00 AM

Great poem. So many images with animals that remind us of the Fall.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 9/24/2024 9:09:00 PM

I enjoy the many objects of autumn in this poem, but especially the grinning pumpkin. It is a pleasant haiku.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/24/2024 11:06:00 AM

What a lovely autumn haiku string, Joseph, that truly encompasses the spirit, whimsy and beauty of autumn. Best wishes for the contest. Soup Mail. Blessings.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/24/2024 9:52:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your lovely Autumn Haiku writes. It is a great time of the year. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a beautiful day writing away................

Peonieslore xo

Date: 9/24/2024 9:19:00 AM

Pleasure reading this lovely array of haikus ~ capturing the elysian essence of this year's autumn..

Daisy Meadows

Date: 9/24/2024 9:14:00 AM

A lovely Autumn poem. Well done.