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Tried to weave a bit of the Sonnet into this Acrostic as it had 14 letters.  It seems to have morphed into a Blank Verse/Free Verse cohesion.  Oh well, guess I shouldn't stay up till 3AM 

Sunset casts no shadows on the damned Ignores the pleas of beggars seeking light Grants the world its darkness - slowly dies Nestles in feigned light of feckless moon. Oh, to but grasp the fervor of its fear Fury, long lost among the stars, Tribute paid nightly to assuage Harsh demons that consume the living stage Extracting from each petal - flowered death. Take heed, contentment leads to apathy, Icy ideologies glazed lies Mocking the light of long dead moons. Error, though not the bane of truth, Serves notice in the beauty of death’s sky. ©4/22/2018 submitted to – Sign of the times – Poetry Contest sponsor – John Hamilton

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Date: 5/3/2018 9:07:00 AM
Yes... "contentment leads to apathy." Such dire but valid warnings in your words, John. Congratulation on your First Place win. Sandra
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Date: 5/2/2018 2:28:00 PM
Outstanding acrostic, John! You set the stage well for fear of the final days, and convince readers that apathy is not an option. Congratulations on taking first place! Hugs, carolyn
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Date: 5/2/2018 4:29:00 AM
Awesome. Congratulations on your win. Kai
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Date: 5/1/2018 10:28:00 PM
Excellent! It’s hard to put a poem to bed when momentum is on your side! Congrats, John!
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Date: 5/1/2018 10:24:00 PM
Obvious your long night paid off. Congrats on your top win, this was not an easy challenge, John.
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Date: 5/1/2018 8:52:00 PM
Congrats on your win, John. Awesome imagery, and the first line drew me in. Have to reread this.
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Date: 5/1/2018 6:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win! Well-written sign of the times acrostic, profound. Well done.
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Date: 5/1/2018 3:20:00 PM
Wow can't believe this had no comments. Well done John was exactly what I was hoping for, congrats on a great win!!
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John Lawless
Date: 5/2/2018 4:21:00 PM
John, I appreciate the placement in the contest. Took a gamble with the sonnet and Viola!

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