Sights and Sounds

Raindrops pounding the pavement
like soldiers marching to war,
dark clouds blowing by
like cars on the freeway,
the crack of thunder sounding
like a home run swing,
and a light show
better than laser Floyd.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Wesley Avatar
April 6, 2012 at 12:04 PM
How I love a storm George, your description reminds me we are due for one and I wait with anticipation! Luv, Lizzie
Grisetti Avatar
April 3, 2012 at 2:35 PM
Interesting comparison at the end. I am glad it is sunny here today, reading this violent weather makes me shiver.
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