Sight Untamed

Paying the price for a thoughtful mind
Gets overwhelming at times
Leaving all the vital parts 
Felling separate
Holding by a thread
Tapping into second wind
Pulling from endeavors bin
Taking time to mend
Agony thralled grin
Calling God all the way 
That he performs 
Faith stay
End still at steak
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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April 2, 2012 at 6:31 AM
What a way to start a new week seeing all the comments made over the weekend to my poetry. Thank you ever so much for your kind words on my poetry Vennie. It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning. Love, Carol
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March 27, 2012 at 2:12 PM
being thoughtful never ends - its heavy and never gets lighter, only heavier, thats the weight of being a good person. i enjoyed your writing, thank you, chuck
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