Sighing Breeze Whispers

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Poetry/Quintain (English)/Sighing Breeze Whispers
Copyright Protected, ID 07-1559-093-02
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Inspiration Line 1 - The silent song of the sighing breeze

Written, July 02, 2023
For the International Standard contest Choose A Line
Sponsor, Joseph May, Judged 07/10/2023

Second Place

Oh "the silent song of the sighing breeze"_ and melody of the birds chirping song, the gentle swaying of the forest's trees; sounds that mingle and twine . . . the whole daylong ! I come upon some wildflowers growing, fragile blooms in yellow, purple and blue; all the while that sighing breeze is blowing, sighing, sighing- though still fragile . . . begin life new ! So, let go of the past sorrow and grief, embrace the beauty of nature for peace; let emotions fall like a tree's dead leaf, the treasure you find . . . is God's great masterpiece !

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Joseph May

Date: 7/12/2023 3:04:00 AM

Wonderful write Constance. Congrats on your win

Constance La France
Date: 7/16/2023 3:51:00 PM

Joseph, thank you so much for the contest and my placement and for the compliment and congrats !

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/10/2023 12:22:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! A lovely write/ending. So true, "the treasure you find . . . is God's great masterpiece !" Have a great day writing away.....................

Constance La France
Date: 7/10/2023 3:05:00 PM

Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations, compliment and comment !