Constance La France Poet Quintain (English)

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Poetry/Quintain (English)/Sighing Breeze Whispers
Copyright Protected, ID 07-1559-093-02
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Inspiration Line 1 - The silent song of the sighing breeze

Written, July 02, 2023
For the International Standard contest Choose A Line
Sponsor, Joseph May, Judged 07/10/2023

Second Place

Sighing Breeze Whispers

 

Oh "the silent song of the sighing breeze"_
and melody of the birds chirping song,
the gentle swaying of the forest's trees;
sounds that mingle and twine  . . .  the whole daylong !

I come upon some wildflowers growing,
fragile blooms in yellow, purple and blue;
all the while that sighing breeze is blowing,
sighing, sighing-  though still fragile . . .  begin life new !

So, let go of the past sorrow and grief,
embrace the beauty of nature for peace; 
let emotions fall like a tree's dead leaf,
the treasure you find  . . .  is God's great masterpiece !

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Joseph May July 12, 2023 at 3:04 AM Wonderful write Constance. Congrats on your win Constance La France July 16, 2023 at 3:51 PM Joseph, thank you so much for the contest and my placement and for the compliment and congrats !

Paula Goldsmith July 10, 2023 at 12:22 PM Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! A lovely write/ending. So true, "the treasure you find . . . is God's great masterpiece !" Have a great day writing away..................... Constance La France July 10, 2023 at 3:05 PM Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations, compliment and comment !

Paige Hind July 7, 2023 at 1:57 PM Beautifully written! Constance La France July 8, 2023 at 10:13 AM Page, thank you so much for the compliment, God Bless !

Joanna Daniel July 3, 2023 at 1:59 AM Great thoughts here, Constance, I too chose the same line:) it's so lovely:) Constance La France July 6, 2023 at 2:35 PM Jo, thank you so much for the compliment, this is a beautiful line to write about, God Bless !