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Poetry/Quintain (English)/Sighing Breeze Whispers
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All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Inspiration Line 1 - The silent song of the sighing breeze

Written, July 02, 2023
For the International Standard contest Choose A Line
Sponsor, Joseph May, Judged 07/10/2023

Second Place

Sighing Breeze Whispers

 

Oh "the silent song of the sighing breeze"_
and melody of the birds chirping song,
the gentle swaying of the forest's trees;
sounds that mingle and twine  . . .  the whole daylong !

I come upon some wildflowers growing,
fragile blooms in yellow, purple and blue;
all the while that sighing breeze is blowing,
sighing, sighing-  though still fragile . . .  begin life new !

So, let go of the past sorrow and grief,
embrace the beauty of nature for peace; 
let emotions fall like a tree's dead leaf,
the treasure you find  . . .  is God's great masterpiece !

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Joseph May Date: 7/12/2023 3:04:00 AM Wonderful write Constance. Congrats on your win Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/16/2023 3:51:00 PM Joseph, thank you so much for the contest and my placement and for the compliment and congrats !

Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/10/2023 12:22:00 PM Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! A lovely write/ending. So true, "the treasure you find . . . is God's great masterpiece !" Have a great day writing away..................... Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/10/2023 3:05:00 PM Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations, compliment and comment !

Paige Hind Date: 7/7/2023 1:57:00 PM Beautifully written! Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/8/2023 10:13:00 AM Page, thank you so much for the compliment, God Bless !

Joanna Daniel Date: 7/3/2023 1:59:00 AM Great thoughts here, Constance, I too chose the same line:) it's so lovely:) Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 7/6/2023 2:35:00 PM Jo, thank you so much for the compliment, this is a beautiful line to write about, God Bless !