Sifting Sad Shadows From the Past

Flour, baking powder, sugar, salt
must be integrated smoothly, to a fault
if what is baked will turn out good
keeping it all in proportion, as one should

"Sifting sad shadows from the past"
to aerate lighter memories that will last
helps break down the bigger lumps
of those times feeling down in the dumps

Having a memory a bit more like a sieve
may not be such a bad way to live
introspection shakes up, softens time
laughing later-- adds a hint of lime
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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May Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 5:46 AM
Congrats on your win Michelle, Nicely penned
Smith Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 11:36 AM
Thanks! :) Last but not least ;P
Meadows Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 11:49 PM
Have read some of your other poems. This is my favourite.
Smith Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 9:16 AM
You inspired me to change my Anthology submission to this poem! :-D
Meadows Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 11:41 PM
A lovely poem. Very clever. Well done.
Smith Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 9:16 AM
Thank you Jeanette! :)
George Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 9:11 PM
Beautiful analogy of sieving sorrows from life and making life enriching as we seive the flour and kned it well with the right ingredients to bake a beautiful cake. Great entry for the contest.
Smith Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 9:17 AM
Thank you for seeing what I was saying, I'm glad to have thoughtful readers like you! :)
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