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Just for fun...Sara

Side effect_life's passion much increased By tiny baby's laughs, coos, and smiles Or puppy playing with toys unleased Side effect_life's passion much increased By meandering in fragrant garden tension released Or relaxing by a fire on rainy day_ fire that beguiles Side effect, life's passion much increased By tiny baby's laughs, coos, and smiles *Note on about this poem

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Judy Ball

Date: 8/31/2011 9:43:00 AM

Lovely Sarah. This points out how the things we see, hear, etc. cause reactions in us. Great job. God Bless, JB

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/23/2011 10:46:00 PM

well I do luv meandering in my own garden at home Sara so an excellent picture painted with this great form luv.. good luck if for the contest..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/23/2011 9:59:00 AM

the picture going with this poem is so lovely too, Sara. Sweet life poem!

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/22/2011 9:44:00 PM

Sweet poem! I really enjoyed it!! "By tiny baby's laughs, coos, and smiles" is such a great line...really makes your poem so much more powerful! I loved your write!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/22/2011 7:08:00 PM

such charm evoked here, sara... superb piece...:) hugggs, nette

Kash Poet

Date: 8/22/2011 5:13:00 PM

Very nice Sara.enjoyed this beautiful write.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/22/2011 4:57:00 PM

WOnderful write from your talented hands and mind.... love it.....luv Michael