Sickness 2005

I conclude my statements were true
I rearrange my thoughts in the sky
I build all that madness I’m going through
I rearrange the truth with a lie

Tired, I walk along my memories
Desperately trying to find a better way
When was that day
That made my way

I’m feeling nervous, getting blind
I’ll end up in unconsciousness
With echoes on my mind

Burning weasels whirling around in creative arrangements
Spitting petroleum at the longhaired rabbit on the other side

Can you tell?

Whilst everyone was waiting
You Shut the door!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 27, 2009 at 12:26 PM
Welcome to poetry soup..excellent deep poem indeed--Charma
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November 18, 2009 at 12:08 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Moritz. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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