Sickness

I've still not healed from you
You're in my blood, my veins
You've seeped in every pore of me
A plague upon my brain
You make me hot like fever
I sweat, my body aches
Lose air when I am close to you
How much sickness can I take
I'm infected with this passion
Desire like disease
It lives in every cell of me
My body's under seige
This carnal need is savage
It's eating me alive
I have to touch you, feel you
Or else I cant survive
There has to be an antidote
A treatment, remedy
To cure this lustful sickness
That's taken over me
I need to search, to find it
And make this go away
I'm so weakened by the wanting
I'm temptation''s easy prey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 2/8/2021 7:43:00 PM
Totally charming. Bravo, Laurie. Great to find this awesome poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~ Beautiful flow and rhythm
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Date: 10/1/2019 12:51:00 PM
Hello Laurie Mahoney, wow! this poem is deep in imagination. I like this poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/4/2019 1:43:00 PM
Hello Laurie,i do understand a deep crush. I have had many of them lately. Have a nice day my friend.
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Laurie Mahoney
Date: 10/1/2019 12:56:00 PM
Thank you. It's about a crush I once had. I could not get over them even though we never dated It was so powerful. Crazy!
Date: 6/18/2019 7:10:00 AM
Yes, deep into the mind. Great!
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Laurie Mahoney
Date: 6/18/2019 8:59:00 AM
Thank u!
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