Sick Trick

You complained, “Don’t come over today -
My throat’s sore, I’m tired, and achy.”
So why are you nude,
In bed with some dude?
If you’re going to lie, pull down the shades!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 6:57 AM
haha, I remember this one! soupmail
Collins Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 7:22 AM
Susan - my sides are splitting. You write these with such wit.
Dietrich Avatar
June 9, 2012 at 8:10 PM
hahaha. That was really clever, Susan. Geeez, I don't think you did a limerick for my contest but I just know PD will love this.
Brown Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 7:02 AM
A beautiful day full of sunshine and good cheer. WOW !!! I am so happy to be able to read your poetry this morning Susan. I wish you a weekend of sunshine and joy and hope you continue to find the inspiration to continue your writing. Will be back reading come Monday I hope. Love, Carol
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June 8, 2012 at 3:39 AM
Sick trick, I agree with you B.E.Susan - well written. - Have a lovely weekend to you. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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June 7, 2012 at 9:59 PM
hummmm! i don't know about this one... aren't limericks suppose to rhyme.... still enjoyed..ps
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