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Sibling Rivalry

Girl Baby Born last month To brother’s wife An ocean of joy to grandma,my mom Were you so glad Ma, when my son was born I dared to ask Teasing her Just for Fun Shush! Stop it Silly girl Gulp down envy She chided me like I was ten years old Written on:07/15/2016

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2016 2:55:00 PM

Your Triple Tetractys poem was awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/26/2016 3:49:00 PM

Thanks dear Sara!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2016 5:53:00 PM

I had really liked this one the first time as well. Congrats for the win.

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/23/2016 9:13:00 AM

thanks dear Andrea!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/18/2016 12:39:00 PM

Ahh!! We all have felt that old jealous monster loom up from time to time...Enjoyed reading your work..Reads like winning material.Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/22/2016 12:38:00 PM

thanks Sara!Always a pleasure to read your poems.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/15/2016 5:41:00 PM

It's sad if you had a right to feel that way, Sara. Yours kind of is like the one I posted in this style, a very down to earth write!!

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/17/2016 3:46:00 PM

Oh yes its quite similar but yours is way better Andrea!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/15/2016 3:20:00 PM

the final stanza sure made me smile Sara good luck in the contest:-) hugs Janxx

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/17/2016 3:45:00 PM

thanks Jan for your comments lady!