Sibling Rivalry

Girl
Baby
Born last month
To brother’s wife
An ocean of joy to grandma,my mom

Were you so glad Ma, when my son was born
I dared to ask
Teasing her
Just for 
Fun

Shush!
Stop it
Silly girl
Gulp down envy
She chided me like I was ten years old

Written on:07/15/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/25/2016 2:55:00 PM
Your Triple Tetractys poem was awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/26/2016 3:49:00 PM
Thanks dear Sara!
Date: 7/22/2016 5:53:00 PM
I had really liked this one the first time as well. Congrats for the win.
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/23/2016 9:13:00 AM
thanks dear Andrea!
Date: 7/18/2016 12:39:00 PM
Ahh!! We all have felt that old jealous monster loom up from time to time...Enjoyed reading your work..Reads like winning material.Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/22/2016 12:38:00 PM
thanks Sara!Always a pleasure to read your poems.
Date: 7/15/2016 5:41:00 PM
It's sad if you had a right to feel that way, Sara. Yours kind of is like the one I posted in this style, a very down to earth write!!
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/17/2016 3:46:00 PM
Oh yes its quite similar but yours is way better Andrea!
Date: 7/15/2016 3:20:00 PM
the final stanza sure made me smile Sara good luck in the contest:-) hugs Janxx
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 7/17/2016 3:45:00 PM
thanks Jan for your comments lady!
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